You MUST review. I'm dead serious about this. You're, like, amazing. SQUEE! ROXAS! *starts dancing*

He makes me really happy!

Oh, and by the way, I started the manga to this. Only a few pages though. Inking takes...a long time... *falls over*

*jumps up, revived* BUT I'M SO STOKED! SERIOUSLY!

Here's all for punching Seifer!! *holds up beer*

- perfect sorceress -

I want to make this into a manga. No joke. I want to do it RIGHT NOW. It's, like, in perfect form! I think I LOVE YOU! < has already pointed this out ^_^U

With your permission, of course, I will TAKE IT! I'll keep the characters the same (too little imagination to make my own *sigh*). Oh, but, I might make Roxas's hair a little easier...if that's okay...

I LOVE THIS STORY WITH BURNING PASSION! I will marry it and have little Fan Fiction Roxette children. ^_^

...Okay, this has officially crossed the line of discomfort, admittedly. But OH MY GOD, ROXAS! He's such a devil's child. *chuckles evilly* Well, actually, now that I think about it, Olette's not that angelic either...Well, whatever, it's awesome.

Whenever I read this, I think: SHOUJO MANGA! Because yes, I AM a major geek. But let's not go passing that around. (It might lower my review rates. :P)

XD SQUEE! Gotta get that fan girl out of me before I start writing the new chapter for BAT. (Breakfast at Tifa's. ^_^)

*sigh* I miss writing for Roxette...

I think I should make a new one. Dedicated to you. Because Homerun and What I Hate About You (WIHAY?) are PURE AWESOMENESS.

...This review is too long.

Stay amazing!!

- perfect sorceress -

Oh my God. My favorite one! Olette! If I was in that situation, I would be so embarrassed I'd probably be listing different options of suicide. >_<

But oh my goodness, I LOVE this story! To three million kadgillion (<made up number) times more than anything!

Of course I'm reading on. I just LOVE both Roxas and Olette's character designs! Everytime Roxas says anything I force myself to resist the temptation of letting out a "squee"!

*throws a million cookies at Dark Ambition*

- perfect sorceress -

I LOVE YOU.

It's decided. I came back to read the new chapter of "What I Hate About You", but I COMPLETELY forgot what everything was about. All I remember was that it was amazing and Roxas and Olette knew each other from, like, three million years ago, and they were always mean to each other.

So I'm reading everything over, and I've kinda got the gist of it.

YOU ARE AMAZING.

Which I've told you about three hundred and forty-eight times. But it never hurts to remind someone. This story has a really cozy feeling. I mean, NONE of the characters are OOC. (Well, Roxas a little, I guess). And it's really believable that if all the characters were living in the same place, this is what their school life would be like.

Like, 1. Sora and Kairi being totally oblivious about everything, 2. Olette being optimistic but also a little dangerous and tomboyish, 3. Seifer being popular and constantly followed by Rai and Fuu, 4. Hayner and Pence being best friends and a little goofball-y, etc. Like, it's AWESOME.

Next is, like, my favorite chapter. "Striptease." ;)

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aww dang I was expecting them to kiss, but oh well. I'm so glad you updated! I can't wait to see what's going to happen between Olette and Roxas. Update soon! =)

AHA! I knew Roxas had some issues!

Yet again, I'm epic win!
[ No, not really ]

:)

Aw! They're beginning to open up to each other! I love how they both supported each other in this chapter without being out of character.

Great Job!

LOL! Zexion is such a Kawaii brother!
Now I wish I had an older brother.

“And what are you supposed to be?”
"I’m sexy for Halloween.”

That had me grinning like an idiot

:D

I think this is my favourite chapter so far.
No wait, I know it is.
:)

The ending was just loaded with cuteness. I love how Olette was so blunt whilst drunk and how Roxas was madly blushing.

So Kute!

OOH!
Quit messing with meh emotions!

I actually thought they were about to kiss!
But they didn't!
-_-

That was VERY VERY VERY eventful.

But WOW, I've never read a more heartless duo. I mean, Roxas is so mean, and the way they argue and stuff is just so...

How do I put this...

Yeah, I can't seem to think of any any words to describe them, and that's saying something.

:)

The only word I can think of is ' indescribable '

:P

'With a girlish scream, he fell off his surfboard and submerged into the water'

The most funniest image painted in my head.

AND ZOMG! Roxas gave Olette the ' Kiss of Life '
SQUE!!

Too bad he stole her ' lip viriginity '
Hehe. I like that term.

I found the ending so sad though.
Roxas has some serious issues.
What kind of guy torments the girl he loves...

LOL!
I LOVE Olette's psycho laughter.

Yup.
I can just totally imagine it.
That's one of Roxas's favourite qualities of hers...

And AW!!
He carried her - BRIDAL STYLE!
So the mood was ruined, who cares.
Just the thought is making my insides all gooey.


& Tifa was in this chapter!
You made her my favourite character in this story
[ not like she isn't one of my all time favs ]

Another brilliant chapter, unsurprisingly.
:D

AW! Poor Olette! Having to replay the lovely show performed by Roxas...

What a nightmare
[ winkwink ]

Horny teenagers = ♥?

And what's worse is that she was caught! For some reason I didn't see that one coming...

:)

Anyhoo, I believe this chapter was marvelous as expected.
I ♥ how Roxas had to sit behind her...
Sweet childhood memories

;D

When you first introduced Tifa, I was like ' WHA--! Tifa = juvy? '

However, I can understand how Olette likes her. Especially after "Olette went homicidal and is now currently trying to kill this boy"

Hehe. Nice sense of humour.

Oh MEE GAWD! Roxas is such a bully!
Well, a good-looking one at that

=D


Hehe. I wonder how this is going to work out.
Roxas and Olette seem to be at each others throats,
so I'm very interested on how this will wind up.
I just can't imagine them softening up with each other.

=D

Aerith is so oblivious that it's just adorable
& HOLY MOLY! Larxene is the mother of Roxas! I
guess that explains aLOT!

;)

Overall, Great Chapter!

PALMface!

You fool Roxas! How could you NOT remember Olette! She's that girl with the awesome hair!

Hehe. Not like I really know what's going on, but anyhoo...

So far, I'm loving this story!
[ Even though Roxas is the biggest jerkface I've ever encountered ]


I think some-one is PMSing
[coughcoughRoxascoughcough]

I loved it! So much suspense! I have been waiting for you to update forever! I'm so glad you did! Please please update soon!