So, this is where you began to invest FFN with your poor excuse for fics... *shudder*... Figured it would be a MS, you good for nothing thing. Pity no one could convince you to stop writting then.

she just suddenly became a super saiyen.
you should have dragged it out!

nice story. i like how you added a girl, i havent seen some one do that in a long time. i think im going to add one in my fic soon, you should check it out. well i think your story is great and you should make more :O)

take care

*eyes go as big as dinner plates* Whoa! Cool!

*eyes narrow, and runs at Goten* WHAT WAS THAT S'POSED TO MEAN? *death glares Goten*

Yes please I want more update please!

I do want more! You can't just leave it there, ya know! Too much suspense! The same goes for your story involving Goku and the Cell Games, A Cruel Twist of Fate, right? Well, I want you to write more! Please! I mean, you write about interesting things. You should continue.

Sheesh. I wouldn't pay any attention, Halo. Saiyans are born lunkheads. Well, they sure weren't very helpful, were they? All these new people...but it's good.

WAI! When are ya gonna put more up? Ne? *teary eyes*

Cool story Halo! I always love your fanfiction, and I don't even watch DBZ! Keep going with this story _

Ooh! I like female fighters. I wanna see more. Show us more of Halo. I wanna see her fighting a tough opponent and win