i like that the main characters name is nadya :P

Very interesting...I'm definitely curious to read more. You asked for constructive criticism, so here it is: I like that you build up the suspence at the end of each chapter. It makes me want to read more. I think that maybe longer chapters would give you a chance to include more dialogue and the thoughts of characters. That's really my only suggestion. It seems really interesting, and I look forward to reading more. Happy reading and writing!

Geek Squared 1307

It's hard to judge a story just by the epilogue. You should write another chapter so us readers know what your stories about, then we can tell you whether you have a good idea or not. But I read the list of chapters and I can't wait to see what will happen next! This is the review you needed, please hurry and write the next chapter.

Short prologue. Wonder what's going to happen...