I know it's been a long time since you updated, but i think you should continue writing more.

She closed her eyes in the fading light. Sesshoumaru is always there, untouchable; always stands out and is always beautiful, just like the moon. No matter how high you climb to reach it, it’s still a hairsbreadth away, she wanted to say.

Now that's an example of some good writing.

Please continue this story. I know it has been several months,but I think it would be worthwhile to finish it.

ZOMG! O.O ME LURVS!>.< you should TOTALLY post another chappie! personally...i just LOVE your amount of description! VERY nice... ^.^

u should definately go on

I liked it! I want some more!

A really great start! I love how Jaken's correcting her Japanese.

I just have one really small nitpicking question:

“Is that your person remains unharmed.” Did you mean something other than person?

Maybe I'm slow? XD

Anyway, you seem to have a solid idea in the works. Keep going, it's totally awesome!

I really enjoyed reading this! ^^ I hope you decide to continue it, it's so cute. I love Rin vs Jaken. So funny. And if Sesshoumaru is there, well... :3 That's even better! XD I'm sorry, I won't fangirl anymore. :P

I loved Rin's little dance. "Jealous, Jealous!" XD

RinxSesshoumaru is one of my favorite pairings. I liked Kagura, but I didn't particularly like the two paired together. *shrugs* Anyway... laters! Hope to maybe see more chapters to this. :D

-Shadow. :D

i enjoyed it pleaes update

please continue!

I liked this. It's obvious that Rin cares about Sesshomaru, but she's too young (despite being in her teens now, I gather) to really understand what she's feeling. And, yes, Jaken is quite jealous :p

- Insanity Lord.

oh yes, you should continue! It's very good so far, very sweet. I especially liked the sentence with the counting the age on fingers. So cute :)