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Reviews For: Just One

titanfan45 2008-04-17 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoy these types of stories and yours was no exception.
Pline 2007-08-21 ch 1,	abusevery good!
Starlight's Delight 2007-06-05 ch 1,	abuseGAAHH! Ha HA! Yes! Finally, somebody who fills in the blanks. Somebody who taps into their normalcy and their humanity. I adore how you look deeper into the worries and fears that go along with their powers, and how you knew they weren't as strong and bold as they pretend to be. I crave stories where you see a real vulnerable side to these characters that has depth. And it's even more impressive considering you were so limited on what you could do. Great story.
VeelaChic 2007-04-13 ch 1,	abuseVery very very great! Just wanted to know, is the chime a metaphor for Beast Boy?
GuardianSaiyoko 2006-12-20 ch 1,	abuseI think Animal's my favorite. I like them all, but particularly Animal, Metaphor, Connection, Lull and Storm, Chess, Children, Fight/flight, and Reciprocity. Yes, I know I just listed off a bunch. I like Chime because I have trouble meditating if my windchime isn't making noise; I've had that thing forever and it used to chime all the time, now it rarely does. Not reading? Well I write...other than that? Hmm. Uh, discuss writing with Cyrus? Wish I could condense things to one sentence, but well, that's what the Live Forever chapter of Whitewater was supposed to be. It had other ideas. -Sai
ShinobiCyrus 2006-12-19 ch 1,	abuseNot bad, I'm not sure if I could ever do a one sentence challege; I find it's really difficult to make my stories SIMPLE. But I digress: Empire, Charm, Range, Acid, Color were great, and Above was spectacularly creative. It's also pretty fun, trying to guess who the more ambigous sentences are about. Keep at it, -Cy
maniacal X3 2006-12-18 ch 1,	abuseThese were great! I liked number 50, 64, and like every other one. I i listed them then you would have em' all! heh heh, anyways great job!
SxStrngSamurai13 2006-12-18 ch 1,	abuseHrm...cute. I really liked it. I doubt I could even do anything close to this. Each little sentence had something about it that was just...cool in it's own little way. Really liked it, keep up the great work. Can't wait for your next TT work!
cruixe 2006-12-18 ch 1,	abuseuUm..what I do when I'm not reading Fanfiction hapens to be not very much. But yeah, this is awesome. I have grown very fond of reading these "based on a word" shots, mostly because of GuardianSaiyoko. It kind of reminds me of that, I like it very much. And I also like that you have correct grammar and just one sentence. I admire correct grammar since I'm pretty much incapable of using it so often. What did Rome have to do with the Titans? I mean it's a really good question, it made me think. But there was nothing...Titan-y (yes. I coined the term...sure.)about it. But I like the one about Raven wondering why Ropbin thinks he can go in her head. That's one of my huge hated things, that stupid, "we have a mental connection after you went in my mind for five seconds and I punched you even though nothing happened when BB and Cyborg went in your head." Erm...yeah. So, thanks for writing it. Really, perhaps it sounds odd to thank you for writing since I assume you enjoy it, but I enjoy reading...so, thank you.
CalliopeMused 2006-12-18 ch 1,	abuse... Kay, you have 64 disjointed sentences. They're not in any order. So why does this have just as much sway as a story? You switch from power to light to whimsical to hopeful to quiet to... there's a lot in here.

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