|Reviews for Child of Ours|
| xxocluvurxx 3/18/07 . chapter 12
So where does it come from and how do you pronounce it. It's strange but maybe with the right prenounciation it would be prettier. Idk. Great story as usual.
| Westcoastlover08 3/18/07 . chapter 12
Okay, I love it love it, love it. Now, I don't think this is correct about Augusts name but, here goes. If it IS August, as in the month then did he get that name because Marissa and Ryan met in August in the 1st season (At least I think they did because it was 1 month before school started again) but anyway, that is my guess. I loved this fic and I loved that we finally learned their first daughters name basically I love the story in general. Your writing in general. SO I can't wait for the next story and to find out what Augusts name really means!
| chasitybsp 3/12/07 . chapter 11
Aw... what a great chapter- Thank god August is ok!- So excited for Marissa and Ryan to be pregnant- Another miracle. I know you said there is only 1 more chapter left so thanks for this great fic- I hope it ends beautifully with the 4 of them as a family!
| Triforce Knights 3/11/07 . chapter 11
I just finished reading it and it was so good :D
| CohenNAtwood 3/10/07 . chapter 11
Oh my god... Thank you... That was just so beautiful... I can't believe there going to have another baby and that there's only one more chapter left. This is like one of the best stories I've ever read on fanfic. Awesome writing rele. I'm sitting here and I'm actually excited and happy that Ryan and Marissa can finally be happy and have their own little miracle. Your a great writer. Can't wait to see how it all ends.
| kursk 3/10/07 . chapter 11
Great chapter, I loved how their 3rd miracle came, cant wait for more.
| nadine 3/10/07 . chapter 11
HI FAB UPDATE I THINK THE LAST CHAPTER IS GOING TO BE GREAT
THANKS FOR YOUR ELPLAINATION ABOUT THE THAKSGIVING HOLIDAY
| YellyBelly 3/10/07 . chapter 11
Oh my goodness! I LOVED this chapter. It was so sweet. And I really had to smile at what a homebody Marissa became. I think it's really wonderful how dedicated she is to her family. No one was forcing her to be a stay-at-home-mom. It's something she wanted to do. I think in her case, it's really admirable. It's so wonderful how happy their little family is. Although, she is a bit old to be having another child, I mean there could be complications with her age, and past history. But Marissa IS healthy. She was always capable of having a child. God just had different plans the first time around. I hope this time, that their little miracle survives. I think it's truly amazing that they were able to create another life. I also am glad that they NEVER forget their little girl-not that, that would be possible. But the way Ryan spoke of her in front of the doctor...it was so bittersweet. As sad as I am to see this story end...I really do think things are coming full circle. And I can't wait to find out what the final chapter has in store.
Update soon, please! :)
| BlueDepths 3/10/07 . chapter 11
You almost had me in tears in this chapter. How...beautiful, just utterly beautiful you write them. It was such a great moment when Marissa passed out, but Ryan managed to catch her, how he reacted as if on instinct. I was surprised to see so much time had passed, and I was starting to lose my hope on another baby for them, but I was thrilled to see that another miracle has occured.
They've been together for so long, but still they're both so much in love, having that passion still between them. August's incident scared them to death, and it's an amazing way to have it erased in a way, by another life R/M created together.
Okay my writing is getting cheesier and cheesier. I'll stop now, but I just have to say how much I appreciate your fan fics, how you portray that amazing couple in every story you write.
| prim 3/10/07 . chapter 11
gave me a shock when marissa got that phone call, but all in all a great chapter! really hope everyone's going to be ok this time...
| ocgirl.fr 3/10/07 . chapter 11
Oh cool ! Hehe they're getting old, i loved this chapter..
But i don't like the fact that this story'll end in the next chap :( ... can't you make it last more longer?
Anyway it was a great story ... well still last chap to read :p
| Ansy Pansy aka Panz 3/10/07 . chapter 11
drama and cuteness
| xxocluvurxx 3/9/07 . chapter 11
Omg that was amazing they're having a baby! I'm so excited! Update soon.
| ally 3/9/07 . chapter 11
LOVE IT! omg i am so happy, please let them have the baby this time! hahah can't wait for the next one
| YellyBelly 3/7/07 . chapter 10
I'm SOO excited to see where you go with this. And what Ryan is doing at the hospital where Marissa lives...especially in the NICU.
In a way...I hope he's not married with children...although last we saw of him, he definitely didn't seem to..productive. Could he possibly be a doctor? Or have tracked her down? Or...have been visiting someone? The posibilities are endless.
I have to say, I was a bit surprised that Andrew was the first to end the marriage. However, Marissa has been going through SO much, trying to raise three children on her OWN with no support except for that sister of hers. Ah! Caitlyn...I know she must mean well...but I have NEVER liked her. And I suppose I never will. Kinda like with Theresa. Who I loatheloatheLOATHE...but at least Caitlyn is bearable in your stories. :)
I'm just so psyched to see what happens next. I mean...she is FACE to FACE with Ryan! Lmao, I'm so excited, hehe. However...things will probably be pretty angsty for a while. I just hope Bailey and Ryan really get to bond. And I even hope Rowan really takes to Ryan. I just think...he has the potential to be such a great father-everything his parents were not.
Please, please, PLEASE write more soon...at least for my sanity's sake. :)