|Reviews for Who Said All Endings Are Happy|
| Kai Kai 10/5/08 . chapter 3
While your writing style is decent, I must let you know that you have created a Mary-Sue (come on- brilliant, talented, political power, a demon, special ring, blah blah blah etc)
Also, the characters are out of character. Kurama is much more confident and less expressive than you make him, and for a high level demon who doesn't put up with anything, Hiei would never be bossed around by a bunch of maids. But maybe that was your attempt at humor...
PS- actual fan girls is a sign of a real amateur writer
| bloodstainedlove 5/5/07 . chapter 3
God its been a long time since weve writen.
| zzxX-Rei-Xxzz 3/10/07 . chapter 3
W00T! go sheer! update soon? pwease? lol Great story by the way!
| Hiei's girl 06 12/20/06 . chapter 1
I like it update soon