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| MochaCocaFan 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abusewhy was Bakura gone? Did he just..i dunno, sleep? Message me bakc. |
| BlackChaosMelvin 2007-01-16 ch 1, | abuseWhat happened to Yami-san? THIS NEEDS A SEQUEL. O.o *twitch* -Melvin |
| FanFicFanGurl101 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abuse... |
| Browneyedalbino 2006-12-24 ch 1, | abuseAw! So sad... T_T Poor Ryou... |
| sexion 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuseMhm, this reminds me of a fic I read a while ago. It was good though, and I enjoy your style of writing. The detective /did/ have kind of a point, even though he was a bit harsh, but I geuss that happens a lot in real life situations too. A rather disturbing - yet brilliant piece of writing. I can't really say much on it - it's well done, but that's to be expected of you, really. ;D (You're a brilliant writer - you shouldn't be so hard on yourself when you say that it's not as good as you wanted. I enjoyed it, at least, and I'm sure that others did too.) So luffs to you for creating this piece, but not so luffs for making Ryou sad. ): Aw well; it was all in the name of good fanfiction! |
| Ai Jiko 2006-12-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI read, I reviewed, please update the story-if it is to be done. 8/10 because of originality (?) but no YnB. |
| Mistress Silence 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseOh wow..I loved it! I thought about something like this once when watching Law and Order SVU! It's great! Well, sad, but well written and well thought out you know? I liked it. Very nice work. This is going to be a fav! |
| Youko's Kitsune Girl 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseThat's soo sad!! T-T Poor Ryou... Your stories always make me so sad Lana! *Pouts*..But...I guess that just goes to show how well you write them. Great job on this oneshot, ^^ This was very well written-and a creative idea! Keep up the good work! |
| Saikurama 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuse*sob* Poor Ryou! And I dislike that detecive, even if he has a point. Very well done! |
| dragonlady222 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseBakura is really a mean bastard. Poor Ryou. |
| Kai's kitty 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseit was so nice! |
| MiyAsuka 2006-12-18 ch 1, | abuseDisturbing, but oh so good! You did a great job with this story. Poor Ryou, I feel so bad for him... |
| AnimeLoverAngel 2006-12-18 ch 1, | abuseI feel like I'm gonna cry..*sniff* Seriously, this is one of the rare fics that makes me cry...!!*cries and hugs Ryou* I know! I KILLED THEM! I HATE THAT SLUT TEA! I might not hate Ygis granpa but... I DID IT! IN JUST TOOK SOME HAIR FROM B-RYOU!*Jumps up and down* |