I quite like this. Your tale spinning is very nice. ^_^ Keep up the good work.

Please, oh please finish this! Although some of your wording could be revised, you plot is entrancing! I love how you did just like Levine herself and wound fairy tales into the story. I was devestated when there was no next chapter to go to, for Beauty and the Beast is one of my favorite fairy tales. This is only the second alternate version that I've seen, and I love the fact that the beast is a dragon. My only great criticism (and it's not much of one!) is that your Ayorthian names were inconsistent with the way Levine created them, that is with each name beginning and ending with the same vowel. (Arieda, Ullu, Ollo...) Honestly, though, I didn't even realize that Levine did this until I read her book "Fairest". So if you haven't read it, I think you'd enjoy it, and if you have, then way to break the rules and do your own thing! (Starting all the names with A... clever!)
Looking forward to the next chapter!
~Fellow Ella fan

What a great story! I hope you continue to update! I would really like to know more about what happened to the castle and this 'fairy' character! I wonder what she did to those people? OO And I really want to know more about the dragon. He is mysterious!

Keep Writing!

I would like to see an update. This is a very well-written story and I wish we could hear more about Elle's adventures. It's very intriguing how you've implemented different fairy tales.

I love it! The idea about the castle inhabitants being ghosts and the castle itself being seen in half memory and half it's true broken down state is great! Write more!

This story seems really good so far, I cant wait to find out whats going to happen next.
ps- I bet the author of this story is really awesome.

I love your story and I hope you will continue it someday! I really love how you portray everyone and that Kellin got to have his own adventure and how you are weaving another well-known fairy-tale into the story! I cannot wait to find out more of what happens to Elle! This is a wonderful, wonderful story!

hi, that was so cool I loved that story, I can't wait to read the next chapter! and my hat (if I had one) is off to you for being able to right so much! this is the longest story I've ever read on fan fic! keep at it! Annerea.

great cliffhanger! Pretty good story so far. I can't read more right now, but I will!

Update soon!! :D Good story!

This story is really good!! I always look forward to reading it. One of my friends and I like to talk about how good it is. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful! Keep on writing. It is IMMENSELY enjoyable.

I really like your story! At first I wasn't sure, but now I absolutely love it! I hope u will continue to update it

I love how you're weaving all the different fairytales together, and then new ideas and interesting twists - It's an amazing story so far! Keep going!! Love the dragon bit. ^^

Great story! I love how you're bringing in all the fairytales. Which is next?