LOL! That was so funny and cute!

Aw, I thought it was really cute when Lawrence told Katie not to get cooties anymore. That was really cute.

So cute...totally made my day.

Just one teensy thing though. Is Lawrence a super genius or something, because he's only seven and already at Hogwarts. Sorry, it was really a cute story, but I had to point that out.

Haha, aww, Lawrence is so cute! :D

Haha! True, older brothers always know! Oh, this was so bloody adorable!
FM

aw

that was so cute
loved it

Okay this is totally adorable...but uh...they were at Hogwarts right? Whats a seven year old doing at hogwarts?


*cries* Im so confused!

Loved it anyway!

Love it. I can´t stop laughing because i just imagine Snape´s face when he saw McGonagall´s underwear. Write more stories about this pairing. I love OW x KB. You have talent to write this type of stories. I hope you do more stories.




P.S -The boy i love did that too. Once he started burping the alphabet. I nearly killed him. When he saw my face, he stop doing it. (Two days later he kissed me, because i wasn´t very happy about that.)

Just got back from my vacation... muhaha. Spent xmas on the plane. The minute I got the chance i log on to fan fic and read this amazing story. Lawrence is so cute and go way up on my list of cute people now. Oliver goes down due to hairy belly. But I still want him, so hands off! Great fic by the way. Maybe you can work Lawrence into Merely the Brutal Truth.

God, I loved it! Oliver was hilarious (“I reckon I still know how to burp the alphabet you know Kates”

Katie shook her head and stood up. “Where are you going” Oliver demanded, “I’m only up to ‘g’”)

Aww... Lawrence was priceless! He was so cute! Another amazing story! Merry Chistmas!

have a candy cane!
great story!
older brothers & sister do always know!

omfg so effin cute. totally going on my faves once i clear some room! ♥

Aww really cute!!

well. . . .all I want for Christmas is Oliver/Sean. . . .do we see that happening?!?! nope! ! ! ! It's unfair, I tell you! ! ! ! heheheheheheehee

at any rate. . . .

I loved this story! ! ! ! I think it would be really cute to do a follow-up piece of when Lawrence is older and Katie and Oliver embarrass him when they see him get his FIRST kiss. . . .I look forward to more of your great work! ! ! !

lol..eww hairy belly...i prefer fuzzy belly...

very sweet, oliver "crying" on katie was funny. good job