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Reviews for: Smile: The Lover
Plainred
2009-03-27 . chapter 1
Too lazy to log on. Great story! I love Sanzo's thoughts.
harukohaha
2009-03-27 . chapter 1
Seriously? This deserves many many many reviews! Great story and so well written. I love the humor and romance. XD
Nefelpitou
2008-01-23 . chapter 1
Oh this is so cute! Sweet, funny and fluffy!
It's a really good OC fic, I like it with humor, it's much better with humor then without.
Psycopath
2007-12-22 . chapter 1
I love you. I love you more that Souji loves Miharu.
Inari
2007-03-18 . chapter 1
Heehee. That was totally hilarious. XD I thought Souji and Miharu were really cute together, too.
Hidari
2007-03-04 . chapter 1
Excellent fic! *grin* Light, funny, amusing. I love all your characterizations especially that of Souji. Narration from the piggy point of view was a great idea! Love you fic!
Oishiimomo
2007-02-05 . chapter 1
aw, that was so cute! Great story!! I love all your stories, and I hope you'll write more when you have time. You develop your characters very well, and you're so talented!
umeko
2007-01-11 . chapter 1
This is utterly hilarious and kawaii! Talk about misunderstandings! Like the way you included Hajime and the Trio as well as Saizou's little jealousy attacks. Big brother Hijikata's nice too.
Starlouse
2006-12-22 . chapter 1
hahahaha, so funny! A wonderfully well written story, love it! Nice nice!
Evee-chan
2006-12-19 . chapter 1
LOL! This is so funny! So many misunderstandings, it's all so funny. This is so good! Keep up the good work. ^_^
sanzo-reload
2006-12-19 . chapter 1
OMG.. THIS IS SO DARN HILLARIOUS! I couldn't stopped laughing when I read this one.. Aw, (hugging you) you're so sweet! I'm glad you decided to publish this fic cos this is one hell of a great fic. And you did great even with romance part. It's very entertaining.

There's a lot of funny part in this story. I love it when Souji asked whether pigs is the ephemism for virginity? That's so -plain weird. And when the part Susumu tried to open the shoji door and the part where Shinpachi stucked on the ceiling.. (Okay, I must stopped now) I love it!

Hope you will continue Smile : The Diary cos I love that fic too!! Anyway, don't push yourself too hard. Until then, ja~
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