that was so cute and natsume was really sweet to mikan and hotaru was being her normal self as in try to make more money and spying on people for blackmailing stuff.

kyah! i loved this! it's like a definite doki-doki-doki! heehee- this was so cute! thank u so much for this fic!

omg the story is really good
Plz read my2 and review it thx

so cute>.< i love it

Ne,another great story huh,Mi-senpai?I can't argue with that...you and illutis mist are both great writers that I admit...Rock on!Peace out!

loved it! as always it was awesome! :)

I love it! ^.^

its really sweet :)

LOVE IT, the endding was beautiful. mikan and Natsume FOREVER!!

The plot is okay, but the characters are way too OOC. Natsume is not so polite and of course you get some points correct such as Mikan being dense and Natsume glaring at other people. But I have to say, the OOCness is way too.. much.. The idea is good, but then again, you know what I mean. Ganbatte^^

This one is one of the best I ever read! ^_^

nice fic! ^_~

cute
it was funny how everyone started to spy on them x]
i didn't expect a part of the ending
anyways, nice one-shot :]

very nice i really like it...pls have a sequel...

IT's very beautiful...,It is the best one shot story i ever read..well thanks for making it...keep it up...
make more stories...please have a sequel


GREAT STORY!