Beautiful and utterly fantastic. You have true writing skills. A sweet ending and a sweet story.

Make careful wishes, never stop dreaming, and certainly don't stop writing!

Brilliant, lovely, amazing and fantastic!! God I loved this so much.

Truly, you've created a masterpiece.

I was surprised to find i had not seen or noticed this earlier; i only found a link recently, have only joined for a couple of days but i am still astounded to find that this brilliant story has been here for about 3 years now =D

It was, and is, mesmerizing, and i can honestly say i think this piece is timeless and will recommend it to any who have watched the movie or enjoyed Pika-La-Cynique's artwork.

You, Ma'am, (i assume you are female due to the elegant text and joke about waking up with a man in your bed) are truly an impressive artist, for that's what i believe you have made of this line of fan-fiction; art.

Haha, sorry if i got a little formal and intellectual about that, but i really wanted to express just how awesome your fanfic truly was =D

I have thoroughly, thoroughly enjoyed this. It's brightened up what would otherwise have been a very miserable day. Extremely well written, too. Thankyou.

Ah... beautiful.
A little gem indeed. =3
Though gems are rare on this site, I seem to be finding many of them in the Labyrinth section. *laugh*

I honestly have nothing to critique. Thank you for the lovely story. ^^

Oh my god this: "insisting that she go back and climb him like a fireman’s pole" almost killed me. I wish I could favorite the hell out of this, times a million at least.

The reason I started reading Karen Marie Moning was because of someone on this site mentioning it, I wonder if it was your story? But I'm sure I'd remember reading this- it's amazing.

I love their chemistry, it's pretty much oozing heat off of my computer screen. LOVE the tension; you've got an amazing talent for this- so incredibly enjoying it, I don't want it to end!

You must be a Karen Marie Moning fan. Or an Amadan fan. Or both. Must MUST be. Either that or I'm just going insane. But it's rather nice, if this is what insanity is like. Totally loving this so far and can't wait to see how it ends. Just felt prompted to leave a contribution in the little box.

Thank you for sharing this. And, for the record, your Jareth is wonderful and every bit as amazingly written as I could wish for.

Love this.

Hey! I am so bad about laeving reviews, but you got lucky because I just had to comment on the Princess Bride references. I totally caught the "As you wish" and was like hey look-- Princess Bride in a totally ironic way. God, I love that book. The movie was done really well too, though.

Anyways, about your story: Wow. You've have blown me away. I have read a lot of Labyrinth fics and this is one of the best I've read. I love your characterizations and how the Labyrinth has not comprised all of Sarah's life. Great, fantastic job!

Sevs-heart

This was truly lovely. I like the fics where there's not all the death threats and evil villains, and it's just Sarah and Jareth together. After all, as you said, the best battle is the one between them. They're wonderful adversaries. Wonderful job!

Absolutely perfect in every way :)

strange... even though my little history bar tells me that it was indeed fourteen chapters, it still feels like a oneshot... i suppose the downside of something truly excellent is that it always leaves you wishing there was more. :)

I really enjoyed this fic. Hot and perfectly characterised. Nice job.

Your story is absolutely beautiful.

This is a lovely story. I've rarely seen fluffy J/S work so well. You seem to hit all the right notes.

I enjoyed your Labyrinth story very much. Especially your portrayal of Jareth and Sarah. I liked how Jareth was more serious and less flamboyant, and how Sarah was smarter, more thoughtful, and less childish.

Very few fics have her even try to be thoughtful when dealing with Jareth. They always show her flying off on a tangent without thought to the consequences. And I like her favorite monologue was actually true. And how Sarah had certain powers over Jareth and the Labyrinth.

It was just a very well done story, with lots of passion, without being raunchy. I like how you did that. Again, bravo.