The verb is "imagine." The noun is "image".

"Forswear" means the opposite of what you think it does. It means to swear falsely, perjure oneself. Or to do without something, reject it. Don't use words you don't know the meaning of ; it just makes you look...not smart.

Interesting story. No prologue? I'd like to see Sarah make Jareth her bitch haha.

I was confused for a second there, but I'm assuming you meant 'psychic' and not 'pysic'.

Wait-what? His Aunt is bad enough, but he plans to bed his own mother?! That is twiiiiiiiisted.

But he already did strike her, in the Ballroom... And another time, he warned her not to strike him, because he 'would strike her back' :/

Hahaha, weapons check indeed. :')

This story fulfilled some dark part of me. A part that I didn't really know existed until now. It was dark, and magical, and horrible, and amazing all at the same time! Perfect. Absolutely perfect.

Well, the love/hate relationship was very interesting, and I did enjoy the story. However, I think I like some of your other stories more. The rape made me very uncomfortable, and I didn't like this Jareth nearly as much as I normally do.

wai-wai-wai-wait! what about the kiss that was promised and dangled like a carrot?

This has to be the best labyrinth fanfic i have ever read, i can tell you that i have read this over and over, if this was a book i would buy. i think you captured jareth's character perfectly.

This was the best! I have read it more than once and thought that I had given a review when I finished it the first time I read it. This is one of my most favorite, one that I like to re-read. I hope that you will write more and finish soon those that are un-finished, so I can add those to the ones I read over and over.

Woah, woah, holy hell, woman. You need to warn for noncon! ESPECIALLY noncon like this! The depths of betrayal experienced by Sarah here, namely how very much of it comes from her own body, would screw any woman up for a long-ass time. Certainly it would take genuine Stockholm Syndrome to enamor her to her abuser after it. It's appalling.

I'm not saying you shouldn't write it. I mean, if you want to play that way with the rape fantasy, that's fine. It's just fan fiction. But warn for it! Preferably in the summary/teaser, but at LEAST in the author's note for the chapter!

Mixed feelings about this one. Many mixed feelings.

I like it, I do. Do I love it? No.

While I do enjoy the fact that Sarah and Jareth bond together through a third party, the constant seduction and the drastic need to have a real heart to heart sit down kinda hangs over the whole story.

I do enjoy how Sarah found her standing in the kingdom. Her maturity really comes through in the way that she runs the household. It's much more believable than a 20 year old doing it without a fault.

I do like the way that the women are portrayed. Strong characters, even though they are used, tricked, and torn in their emotions and loyalties. Well shown to give the story a more mature, realistic showing of how life is complex and never a purity among them. Or rather, there was - but it was wrenched away.

I appreciate the realism of emotions and the tangled manipulations that have lead to this sweet resignation, it seems that it isn't what I'm looking for in a story. By all means, it does not mean that the story is bad in any way. The details and the near complete run-throughs of Jareth's sexual conquests are fantastic.

The ending leaves me hoping for a sequel (which I will be looking for, though I don't think it's necessary to have one) because I want to see how Sarah uses her knowledge of Jareth. It wasn't really explored in the short time that the story gave her.

I guess at the end, all I want to say is: Well written, wonderful use of manipulation, realistic emotions and consequences. But not my favourite flavour of tea, but that's just me. It's still well brewed.

Lol! For a moment there I thought they where raping hands or something...o_O