that's a captivating first chapter/prolouge. but where's the rest! i want more! -whines-
~Evelynn

oh my god how beautiful. you're going to update, right?

Aargh. Continue already! D:

Woh... powerful. O.o Sometimes I feel like Ed here... in the "eat more, sleep less" part only! Can't wait for this to be finished...

great starting..!! can't wait for more..!! pz update soon..!!

M, one-sided...very sad, well-justified, multi-sided. Maybe 'volunteering skin' could be 'proffered', but anyway, good writing.