This is such a good fic! I can't believe you have so little reviews. You can tell that you can have a bit of a talent for writing, and can sculpt characters to perfection. You actually make things seem realistic and exceptable to common sense (unlike most fics out there)
What I REALLY can't believe is that you haven't updated in yeaars. I'm completely and utterly heartbrocken. You can tell that this has potential to be epic. All the good Artemis/Alex slash's are all oneshots... This could have been brilliant... BRILLIANT T_T

I love how Butler's leaving Artemis's side, Artemis's reaction to it and his general weird character. Alex isn't an all-powerful dude, he can get his ass kicked by Butler too (which was great reading. I kept laughing all the time). I wish I knew how this ended up becoming slash, how our pair would interact... I know that no matter what, it'd be brilliant though.
PLEASE think of doing another chapter. If you can^t bare the slash, make it an open-ending three-shot. Just finish it... PLEASE.

-Totally desperate dude

I think it mentioned in the book that Alex already knew japanese?

Hey are you going to update this story?

this story is...
well quite frankly awesome
I love it and I cant wait for the next chapter

blessed be
from belle

You've been getting reviews for this almost monthly, without having updated it. It's such a good story, I really would like you to finish it, but I wonder why you haven't touched it in so long? You don't even mention anything about a hiatus, or discontinued, so :( Well, I hope that one of the reviews you receive every so often will nudge you into finishing this.

I think it's MI6, but it doesn't matter.

Please, please, please write the next chapter!

I really like this story, especially with the promise of slash, all the characters are so very in character. Alex is much more sensible and objective than Artemis, I think. Sometime in the future, will the Farie get involved, that would be a fun can of worms to open.

But...you last updated in 2006, it's now 2009. You said there's more coming soon, so, can you update? Pretty please?

i thought artemis cared for his parents?

Like it. PLease update.

its awesome, but please update soon.

are you going to continue this story? cuz i kno that you last wrote in 2006?

good i guess. whens the next chapter

oh god!! please, please please continue this story! i love it so far... the interaction between the characters is both believable and dare i say it, electrifying

Wow. You should update this. I like it.

This is the best Artemis Fowl fic I've read so far. Artemis isn't out of the character for once, and Alex is very IC as well. They're both very tricky characters in the books, but you've portrayed them very nicely. I really adore your Artemis and I like the plot.

But I'm worried because you haven't updated this story in two years. I really like this and I want to read more. I hope you haven't given up on this one. I understand if you haven't had any interest to write this but I'd like to know if you are continuing this or not.

Send me a private message if you read this.

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