AW!
It's so sweet!

great story!

AWW! I love a sappy ending! But after all that that darn Bakura steals the Sundae? Love this story one of my favourites! I'm writing my own Seto fic so please review mine in return if you decide to read :-)

I really like it! I look forward to your stories every day!

Aw! This story is so cute...
I wish you could make some more stories like these...
PLease make some more stories...

Aw yay! The ending was perfect and oh so funny! Thanks for sharing!

Cute ending. I like how Bakura randomly popped out of nowhere and stole the sundae. It was a very nice story, thank you for the enjoyable read.

AWW! That was a awesome short story! Great job!

aw~~! WAY CUTE!~ prettiful~'.~'.~'.~'.~'.~'.~'.~'o.c.monkee

very good

This was such a cute story and I can't stop laughing at the part with Bakura stealing the sundae! XD I love this story a lot. I'd love to read any of the other stories you have written. Keep up the great work. :D

WOO!! aww, that was a sweet ending. lol. i loved the bit where bakura stole the sundae - it was just so unexpected. heheehee.

^.^

shadow in the basement

cute ending.

OMG!! This is probably the BEST short story I have EVER read!! You should do a sequel or tell me when you put another SetoxSerenity story up, because your stories are the best!! Wodnerful job!! Best SetoxSerneity story I have read!!

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Aww...I love it! Seto and Serenity are getting so close...BUT to bad Serenity and Joey are now growing apart...hope they work everything out...off to the final chapter!

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