Is Neji dying?

There's a rather dark atmosphere to this; the last line makes me think that Neji's haveing the "whole life flash before his eyes" thing before his death.
Simple and sweet. Nice job!

That was very remorseful...It made me cry. But I loved it.

aww...that's so sad...:(...very good tho.

whoa, thought I'll give it a try, and I went ike, this is hot...^_^ Awesome story--err, one shot!

Terrific job, and happy holidays! :D ;D

aww, neji's all worked up with regret... remembering things more clearly then hinata would. yeah he did some bad during the chuunin exam, but hinata will definitely cherish neji's good deeds =]

awe that was cute cuz he was like all I remember this and I remember that and then he was like please remember me and I was like AWE!

that was totally short and sweet. ^_^ some ppl dont usually like these small little thingys but they're really nice once in a while. You should write more little stuff just like this to give large story readers like me a little break. lol this was awesome

luv melanie

that was so sad but very good

Thats so sad... i liked it though