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Princess Pika
2007-12-05 . chapter 4
AW! This story doesn't suck, it's good. I love it... the plot is good, and ty lokka rules!
Demetria912
2007-12-05 . chapter 4
Sometimes, I have to agree. Everybody does the same thing and nobody does anything original any more. It gets pretty boring.
I hope you don't delete your account at least. I do like your stories and it would be a shame for them to be deleted. If you don't want to update, that's fine, but please don't delete everything.
I wish you the best of luck with everything!
~Demetria912
RobinXRaven4ever
2007-09-06 . chapter 3
Awe so cute! Update soon!
colt321
2007-06-24 . chapter 3
New chapter please
Solareon
2007-06-23 . chapter 3
great chapter can't wait for the next
Sam
2007-03-21 . chapter 3
i like it! it's very... different! but i still like it! and i can't wait till the taang comes! woohoo! update soon! ☺
Kitty East
2007-01-28 . chapter 3
Squeak. That's awesome! XD Update soon, please.
iZutara
2007-01-26 . chapter 3
I like this chappie :) Ozai's happy side... hm... kinda scary like Zuko's happy side. Well, awesome story, update soon. And I like the 'Mister Dad' part. hehheh.
iZutara
2007-01-26 . chapter 1
Go Zutara :) Go Tykka :) Go Kata...uh, No.
Lol.
stella
2007-01-24 . chapter 3
O!
Another GREAT story!!
LADY'S AND GENTLEMEN! I DO BELIEVE WE HAVE A PROFESSIONAL AUTHOR IN THE HOUSE!
(giggles)

Yeah, anyway please update!
PLEASE!
Edward'sBringingSexyBack
2007-01-23 . chapter 3
HAHA. OMG. Ozai was halarious in that chapter.
Dragon Jadefire
2007-01-22 . chapter 3
Anyways, I tend to make Ozai OOC when I'm about to kill him. But I'm thinking of changing that and just keeping him evil until the end. You know what, I think his face is going to look normal. Yeah, normal. I love your work and I believe you found me on Youtube. I haven't watched any of your vids yet, I might have, I'm not sure. Anyways um...yeah. Ursa/Ozai is like the only canon pairing, unless you run into one of those Iroh/Ursa fans.
Dragon Jadefire
2007-01-22 . chapter 2
Ozai seems OOC, but I'm cool with it.
Ty-Lee Sweater Fund
2007-01-19 . chapter 1
Sounds good.
TY-LOKKA!
Persian Girl
2006-12-19 . chapter 2
must say chapter may have been better but you do great job. keep riting sorry if my english or grammar is bad.
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