 Beta-ReaderADV 2008-08-07 . chapter 1Interesting choice for the "God" role... He probably views himself as such...
Isn't the understanding thing the other way around with Holly and Arty? |
 anyonomous 2007-07-13 . chapter 1 um... i dont really find it intresting! |
 Sovrani 2007-01-21 . chapter 1wow this is so pieful! its interesting and confusing but i like it anyway!
Eat pie, y'all! Kisses and virtual hugs to all! Mwah! |
 Lady Beckett 2007-01-02 . chapter 1 Very Cute. Intersting..um..inspiration. Anywho, very nice fluff; not cheesy, just right
P.S. The Oxford English Dictionary spells everything)every thing as one word word. So there |
 kelsey 2007-01-02 . chapter 1 i've never read anything like this before. (good idea and well written) |
 Acelinn 2006-12-20 . chapter 1interesting abstract version of creation! hehe - i like it! it has aspects of the original creation story from the Bible, but is also VERY different (err... Foaly is God!)!
Good Luck
-AMY |
 Realilly 2006-12-19 . chapter 1hahaha, nice!
but wouldn't artemis b understanding and holly b not understanding? idk...
*shrug*
*runz off 2 corner laughing* |
 Xx Artemis Rox mi Sox xX 2006-12-19 . chapter 1him... confusing but i luv those kinda fics caz u have to figue them out xD its good :D
Roxies |
 Olynara Sedai 2006-12-19 . chapter 1Well, that was odd. Good, in a strange way :). Interesting idea, cute. |
 Child of the Sky 2006-12-19 . chapter 1Once again, you've written an excellent piece! |
 blueholly 2006-12-19 . chapter 1Haha never thought of Foaly as God before... but /vedy/ happy that you'll be updating Now or Never. *ebil stare* |
 Dreaming-Cat-369 2006-12-19 . chapter 1Oh, beautiful fluff! If all fluff was this good I'd read more of it. |