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Reviews for: Nan Qwei
Roony
2006-12-21 . chapter 1
very good fic!
certainly had the tone of an episode; great accomplishment!
As a Blue Spirit fan, I was happy to see him ride again, so thanks for that.
I really liked the humor you threw into this story; made me chuckle a bit.
The Zuko-Iroh intereaction was especially good.
this is definitely a favorite of mine;
cheers!
loalaa
2006-12-20 . chapter 1
Wow, this was pretty good!
Your sue hurts my brain
2006-12-19 . chapter 1
Great job on this. the story sounds and plays out very much like the show you captured the feeling near perfectly.
The only problem I can find is the switching of perspectives took me out of the story for a second but it weas necasarry so alls good. anyways good job and keep writing.
Griffinkhan
2006-12-19 . chapter 1
Great job, Omni. Avatar fanfiction is difficult to write, but you managed to pull it off beautifully. The character's personalities are perfect, especially Sokka. Keep up the good work!
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