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| Roony 2006-12-21 ch 1,  | abusevery good fic! certainly had the tone of an episode; great accomplishment! As a Blue Spirit fan, I was happy to see him ride again, so thanks for that. I really liked the humor you threw into this story; made me chuckle a bit. The Zuko-Iroh intereaction was especially good. this is definitely a favorite of mine; cheers! |
| loalaa 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was pretty good! |
| osilus 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat job on this. the story sounds and plays out very much like the show you captured the feeling near perfectly. The only problem I can find is the switching of perspectives took me out of the story for a second but it weas necasarry so alls good. anyways good job and keep writing. |
| Griffinkhan 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat job, Omni. Avatar fanfiction is difficult to write, but you managed to pull it off beautifully. The character's personalities are perfect, especially Sokka. Keep up the good work! |