 Roony 2006-12-21 . chapter 1very good fic!
certainly had the tone of an episode; great accomplishment!
As a Blue Spirit fan, I was happy to see him ride again, so thanks for that.
I really liked the humor you threw into this story; made me chuckle a bit.
The Zuko-Iroh intereaction was especially good.
this is definitely a favorite of mine;
cheers! |
 loalaa 2006-12-20 . chapter 1Wow, this was pretty good! |
 Your sue hurts my brain 2006-12-19 . chapter 1Great job on this. the story sounds and plays out very much like the show you captured the feeling near perfectly.
The only problem I can find is the switching of perspectives took me out of the story for a second but it weas necasarry so alls good. anyways good job and keep writing. |
 Griffinkhan 2006-12-19 . chapter 1Great job, Omni. Avatar fanfiction is difficult to write, but you managed to pull it off beautifully. The character's personalities are perfect, especially Sokka. Keep up the good work! |