 Gray-Rain Skies 2006-12-23 . chapter 1 First of all, thanks so much for you're review. I'm happy you liked my story.
And secondly, this is a great fic, I dunno what you're talking about. You're a bit repetitive, often saying words too much sentence after sentence (umm, like first paragraph, I think you said "boulder" too much), but that's only a small thing. Really, I liked this a lot. It's cute and sweet and I think you did a great job.
Awesome entry. |