Nice.

Hahaha! I can't stop laughing when I read this...!

I want to see Hiruma's face when Mamori told him that she's pregnant! Uhh, I hope there'll be a pic of him in that state! :D

And I also laugh in the last words.. 'In bed of course' and that's so hilarious! Hahaha! *can't stop laughing*

whahekehekehkehek :D
THAT made me laugh!
nice work! ^_^

hhahahaha

i love it... honestly... to the highest level

Oh! I love it! it's so funny and entertaining.

what the--
it was kind of hard to read the words are--

mou! can't explain! anyway its a good fic!
keep it up!

Ahahahahaha! I'm laughting so hard it actually hurts!

Lol, hilarious. Think you can come up with a sequel with another Hiruma and Mamori romance. I'd love to read about Hiruma paying Mamori back for her April Fool's prank. :]
Ty for the story.

LOL! omgosh! Mamori is so cruel! haha. but it's fun to see Hiruma so vulnerable like this. :) Great job!

Burn baby burn, Hiruma had it bad! That was funny but I was also wondering why it was one chapter for this kind of situation but... now I know. Nice one, got me going my self!

^_~!

Hah love this. Hiruma freaking out! xD Hilarious
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Seesh just give me a panic attack who don't you! It was well written and quite unexpected. To think our sweet little Mamori could pull something so huge over Hiruma! I'm still smiling. I hope you write more soon and happy holidays!

Excellent piece of work, you really should have kept it for April's Fool.

How abt a New Year's Day story? Please?

great fic! love it~