I think you have put this in the wrong category, mate. This area is for fanfictions about a book series called 'Spooksville', not a place for scary stories. I think you would put this in the misc. section? I'm not sure, but look into it because it cetaintly doesn't belong here.

Regards :)

Great idea. Very interesting story and well written. Well done!

Dear julian:

Okay... what does any of this have to do with "1984"?

Sincerely,

Qoheleth