 Mika the Dark princess 2/19/12 . chapter 1Lov it |
 Ghostwriter 9/16/11 . chapter 1Wow. Heavy. Catch ya on the flip side. |
 Itachi's aprentice 10/5/08 . chapter 1One word: Awesome. |
 SadJack 6/4/08 . chapter 1I don't know if i've submitted a reveiw of this story before but this is the 4th time ive read it. I gotta say this is to me the proper way to support a Tom/Kim story profile for the future. If you ever expand on the line of this story be sure that I will be reading it with great intrest. But I also have to say that I hope if you do continue this that you develope it along an age factor for appropriate needs. In other words starting as is being like a PG-13 base and ending into a more deep mature level by the time college years and beyond happen. |
 Solarstone 4/18/07 . chapter 1Kim's little speech near the end was pretentious as hell, considering she fed Tommy's heart to the sharks. I still liked the fic though (even if I wanted Tommy to say yes to having slept with Kat XD) |
 Anjirika 2/14/07 . chapter 1*sniff*
So sweet...made me cry...this is the way the Turbo movie should have ended... |
 rapunzl 2/2/07 . chapter 1I've read a lot of fics struggling trying to get Tommy & Kim back together, but this was by far, the best way I've seen it done (or not done). You captured both their personalities very well, and didn't try to weasel Kim out of the letter that she wrote.
Very very well done. I'm super impressed - I'll make sure to keep you on my Author Alerts from now on! :) |
 Silver Warrior 12/28/06 . chapter 1wow. He didn't get closure, but maybe closure isn't something he needs. Love that promise Kim made. |
 Chaikakhan 12/21/06 . chapter 1I've read such bad Tommy/Kim fiction lately. This was a breath of fresh air. As much as I'd like there to be a chapter 2, I think that this story ends right where it should. |
 logicproblem 12/21/06 . chapter 1Holy CRAP!
That's seriously one of the best first chapters I have ever read.
Please dear God, tell me there's more?
I am absolutely seething with jealousy at how you've set this story up.
seriously, amazing... I guess it goes without saying that I liked it. please update soon! |
 CoolDiva 12/21/06 . chapter 1One word: WOW. |
 EclipsingFlames 12/21/06 . chapter 1I'll forever be chasing after you greatness...
Still the king of T/K fanfiction. Amazing job as always. |
 psav2005 12/20/06 . chapter 1great story |
 Vodams 12/20/06 . chapter 1I have no problem giving u another one..I love it Shawn! keep them coming! |
 1nf1n1te Ju5t1ce 12/20/06 . chapter 1Wow first review... Anyway good job, u captured the kiss scene with great emotions. Pity kim's POV wasnt in there too. U interperse dialogue n exposition well for a one-shot. keep it up dude |