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uzumaki rairakku
2010-01-02 . chapter 3
giving spotlight to all the filler/movie girls, then?
nice.
uncommon but amusing (:

how about including amaru from the naruto shippuuden movie 2?
^^

do update soon!
The Crimson Destroyer
2009-12-30 . chapter 3
who are ran and kyaku
daniel 29
2009-12-08 . chapter 2
Not only that, but the training had also given her one of the sexiest bodies in the village. With such a rigorous workout, Hokuto kept her slim figure, while gaining a lean, muscular body. The kind that could only be achieved through excessive physical training. The kind of body most dieting women aimed for. Her muscular, trim figure had the average man literally drooling in her direction.

You have to admit this would be a great picture to see don't you think?
Iron Reprieve
2009-11-14 . chapter 4
Heh first off, I really adore this fic. Grammar is good, timing is excellent, everything just, ya know pops in all the right places.

Second, why oh why, did you end it there? Just when Naruto finally meets up with Hokuto-tan again...The world needs more Hokuto-tan! XD

Rant aside I'm on pins and needles; for the next chapter.

Cheers,

-IR
sasodei-iz-awesome
2009-11-13 . chapter 4
Oh boy. Let the fun begin. -evil grin- Oh man, if I was in this storyverse I'd be Naruto's bff and have so much fun with this situation. It's practically BEGGING for someone, like Sasuke (Not saying he needs to have some miracle come-back or something) to ridicule him. Oh Lord, that would be awesome. :D

Peace, love, and all that shit...
~Sasodeiizawesome~
sasodei-iz-awesome
2009-11-13 . chapter 3
... XD Poor Naru! He's gonna be SWAMPED with girls... XD That's gonna be hilarious since he's a lil' naive... Oh, I'm gonna laugh so hard in this fic. XD

Peace, love, and all that shit...
~Sasodeiizawesome~

P.S. And how some people from the main Naruto cast is helping someone from the filler arcs? XD Brilliant!
sasodei-iz-awesome
2009-11-13 . chapter 2
Ooh, go Hokuto-chan! Aw, she was so adorable in that particular filler.

Peace, love, and all that shit...
~Sasodeiizawesome~
sasodei-iz-awesome
2009-11-13 . chapter 1
OMG, this story is so smart. Honestly, the filler girls NEVER get any credit and some of them are pretty cool...

Peace, love, and all that shit...
~Sasodeiizawesome~

P.S. On your profile, did you list ALL of the filler girls or just ones that will be in your story?
garsdal
2009-08-05 . chapter 4
this is strange... there is a scarsly clad beautiful female in my room... JACKPOT!
becouse noone seemed to find it a good aidere to tell him that his apartment was being rented out to someone else at the moment.
i am expecting double exclamations of WHO IS SHE!? in the next chapter:D
Holyriot
2009-08-02 . chapter 4
Nice fic.
DragonBlade00
2009-07-15 . chapter 4
interesting story, update soon
Kyuubi Fanatic
2009-06-08 . chapter 4
Nothing to tear apart honest, though I disappointed in myself for not keeping up with this. Sad you no longer have interest in it, for only 3 chaps and a prologue this is one my most looked forward to readings. I've been following it since day one...so very very long ago.

Hope your interest peeks at some point; would be a shame to abandon this.

Your old pal,

~KF~
geetac
2009-04-15 . chapter 4
I like the chapters for this story and want more.
joseph33759
2009-04-07 . chapter 4
I'll say CONTINUE! lol
25636646735736677485
2009-03-30 . chapter 4
please update this is my second favorite naruto harem first being girl fight and he hasn't updated in a year either please please give me any thing i'm hooked on your story and i want more
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