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Era Yachi
2007-04-24
ch 1,
abuseOoh, grammar bad. Oh, well. Not your fault. Written outstandingly. Love it. You captured Harper's essence very, very well. Also kind of sad...a sad Harper. I always loved the fact that his password was 'Valentine' all along.

Still...sad. I've said that, haven't I? Well, beautifully sad. I'll stop now. ^_^
MaryRose
2007-02-01
ch 1,
abuseThis one was good too.
squid109
2007-01-30
ch 2,
abuseRead this over on ExIsle I still like theses lines

„You see, Harper, before I got to be your Beka, I was also your captain. And I was a good captain, Harper. None of you had really a reason to betray me.“

She looks at him coldly, but there are tears gleaming in her eyes.

„I still am a good captain. It's just that by now only Dylan knows it.
Natta
2006-12-26
ch 1,
abuseIt's so bittersweet. *loves*
squid109
2006-12-20
ch 1,
abuseNicely done
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