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| Era Yachi 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abuseOoh, grammar bad. Oh, well. Not your fault. Written outstandingly. Love it. You captured Harper's essence very, very well. Also kind of sad...a sad Harper. I always loved the fact that his password was 'Valentine' all along. Still...sad. I've said that, haven't I? Well, beautifully sad. I'll stop now. ^_^ |
| MaryRose 2007-02-01 ch 1, | abuseThis one was good too. |
| squid109 2007-01-30 ch 2, | abuseRead this over on ExIsle I still like theses lines „You see, Harper, before I got to be your Beka, I was also your captain. And I was a good captain, Harper. None of you had really a reason to betray me.“ She looks at him coldly, but there are tears gleaming in her eyes. „I still am a good captain. It's just that by now only Dylan knows it. |
| Natta 2006-12-26 ch 1, | abuseIt's so bittersweet. *loves* |
| squid109 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseNicely done |