 ritachi 2006-12-21 . chapter 1Wow, that was totally perfect! I loved it. Just amazing story about Talia and Gilbert. I am so impressed with this piece of work. Actually, this story is the first I've ever read about Gilbert and Talia, and I don't regret it one bit. It is actually a bit fun to read how adults become lovers. It isn't too mushy or rushed. This was perfect and just adorable! The ending was just right. Nothing felt awkward or out of place in this one-shot.
It's just so good that you should be proud of yourself. Really! The other reviewers need to praise you more 'cause this is just remarkable! I've never read anything so mature yet sweet in this fandom! So congratulations!
Oh, and another Gilbert and Talia story you want to read is called "Fate's Hand" by wxo-0I0-oxw. Sorry if you've read it already, but you said suggest. ^-^ |