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| oneswordsworn 2008-05-12 ch 8, | abuseVery interesting. I didn't expect the twists that I have seen so far, and I am curious to see where the heaven side of things goes. Only thing, please, please put some kind of break between your different groups. Would make following the story much easier. Thanks so much. Please continue the story when you are able. |
| Deathmvp 2008-05-12 ch 8, | abuseI have liked the story so far and look foward to reading more. While I am honest I only like storyes with happy endings for the most part I think yours can go to a happy or sad ending easly and that is good before the end. One thing though. When you jump from one spot to the otheryou should put in some type of break. It could be something like a few blank lines some think like _ This way it is very easy to see that a change has happend. |
| Nathen Long 2004-06-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood story, please continue updating. |
| Nathen Long 2004-06-03 ch 7, anon. | abuseGood story, please continue to update the story |
| Nathen Long 2004-05-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseGreat story, please keep on writing |
| Nathen Long 2004-03-13 ch 6, anon. | abuseHey, the story is very good with one problem, it is not finished. Please contiue writing Of Angels and Demons. |
| Ghost 2003-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseALL CHAPTERS UP TO 6. When I read this story, I was sure that someone was going to make a movie out of it. This story contains wonderful plot and character development not to mention the details. The drama leaves you wanting more in this wonderful OMG fanfic. For those wanting to enjoy themselves in joy/horror/sadness/excitement. Read this one. Hint: You'll love the Kami-Sama description. |
| RenoKri 2002-12-31 ch 5, anon. | abuseSpealing of Norse mythology alltough urd and skuld are the right names belldandy is nto the correct name for the the goddess of the present , her name is really Verdandi in the mythology but the story had been great |
| Another Duck 2002-12-17 ch 6, | abuseWell, well. All you need now is the appearence of an overgrown wolf, and you've got all of the trickster's children depicted, if I'm guessing correctly. Well, counting the three most dangerous children, anyway. Being a Viking myself (well, it's very likely in my blood, at the least), I find this story interesting with the above average Norse mythology content compared to other fics I've read. As far as the characterisation goes, I'd say it's close enough, considering what they have gone through. Though I would like a bit more interaction, especially between Keiichi and the two older sisters. I'll be checking for an update. |
| Shawndine 2002-12-05 ch 6, anon. | abuseVery good. Story line is easy to follow. Just enough action to keep a person interested. Needs a touch more "romantic" detailing, but that's up to you. Keep writing well. |
| Dria 2002-05-28 ch 5, | abuseJUNE?! That's not fair...... I dun wanna wait that long. Okay, enough complaints ^_^ This is very good. I do want to know what's gonna happen!! And I'll wait..........patiently........... until it's done (although sooner would be preferable to later) |
| someone 2002-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is the most amazing story i've read in a long time. i'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter :) |
| Lady Athena 2002-05-20 ch 5, | abuseThis story is sooo good! Can't wait for more! |
| Shaun MacLeod 2002-05-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis is a really a great story and cannot wait to read more of it. |
| Kamzu 2002-05-16 ch 5, | abuseWhat the... thats it?! 2 months and this is all... Its good and all, with a lot of typos and stuff, looks kinda hurried and sorta short... |