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XxInume-TakahashixX
2009-03-10 . chapter 23
"I Hate you! I hate you! I swear to God I hate you!
Oh my My god I love you!"

This was the song I was thinking about the whole time I was reding this beutifully heart aching, twisting, and very sad story. The song Kim written and performed by Eminem only because...well it seemed to fit.

One person caused a loving couple to split apart and treat each other the way they did...change one's attitude towards another and also make the daughter of that person suffer internally because of what she feared she had caused. Jade, i love that name by the way, thought she was the reason to her mother's pain whe in reality she was the one thing that brought then together. Think about without Jade Inuyasha probabaly would have never seen Kagome again in vice versa...they would have been looking around the world for wha as the wuote saids was always right at home. Home is where the heart is and in this case it was always with Inu and Kags.

But i'm not going to lie. I cried almost through the whole story..from when she was gettiong raped all the way up until the last chapter. Youre words were so powerful that i felt Kagome's pain and i also understood where Jade and Inu was coming from...especially Jade.

My Dad...he's an asshole...he hit my mother...left us when my sister was born...went across the country to find a new family a wife and two daughters...the same thing he had here. I still don't kow what he was lokking for and for some reason i don't think he'll ever find it. He never sees me on my birthday due to my step sisters birthday being a day before mine and he rarely speaks to me through out the year. I cried for Jade...I hate what i have to go through to see the pain that my mom goes through everyday and as a kid i shouldn't have to witness theses things at such a young age.

You know sometimes i wonder as i the reason my dad hit my mom or that they neveer fgot along or even if i was the reason he wanted to leave. I wasn't good enough for him and I undersand that...but it hurts. It hurts like hell and now becoming 17 i feel like I had wasted my time waiting for my dad to relixe one day that he missed us and that he would choose us over his new family and i kno that it was just wishful thinking...

ANyway dorry to just bombard you with my life...it's just hard you know and i've never cried this much during any stories iu have ever read and well yours just hit very close to home.

I loved It...thanks for the story!

Ja matta Ne
Faryn Katz
2008-12-27 . chapter 23
*love* this is such a great story!
Taji
2008-12-11 . chapter 23
Awesome! Loved it!
MayMayLove23
2008-12-09 . chapter 23
omgg i love this story!!i am saving it this time :)
BlueTinge
2008-11-30 . chapter 23
This story was one of the best I have read!
Please continue writing!
kidalare
2008-08-14 . chapter 23
Aw it's over!! This story really made me cry oh my gosh!! I loved it, such a wonderful ending. I couldn't get away from the computer until I was finish. Great story!! I'm such a sucker for those happy endings. Nice seeing Kikyo playing good for a chance too and it really almost made me despise Koga all together. The part when he brought I'm assuming Ayame in the house and said Kagome was his maide reminded me of The Joy Luck Club. Then the wine in the blue wrapper with Kagome/Inuyasha reminded me of The Parent Trap (Lohan version). Really great story, okay I'm gonna stop typing now before i cry again.
soziewozie4ever
2008-08-10 . chapter 1
cool i love it
thesims1231
2008-08-07 . chapter 23
I liked it but it was a little too depressing for me at times...
Say L8er Not Goodbye
2008-06-20 . chapter 22
I must say i like the way kikyo was portraded i was set for her to be the bitch and all that jazz but it was suprislying refreshing for her to be the kind heart though i was waiting on her to turn on them every time I feel kinda of bad for being biast twors kikyo i Loved the way she broke out of that sterotype good job. Now all i've got to do is read the last Chapter and its goin on my favs
monika
2008-06-10 . chapter 23
hey i just wanted to tell you that i loved your story! i read the whole thing in 4 hours! but i wanted to ask you for a sequal, you know like kagome and inuyasha get married have a nother kid and jade gets to be an older sister and shes like dating kohaku or some thing like that! i just love jade! i wish you would write a story about her! it would be so cool!
(oh and sorry that i dont have a name thingy i dont have a fan fiction account but im gonna make one once im done with this review)
xsachi
2008-06-06 . chapter 23
ah this story made me cry a few times but in the end it made me smile! great job!
kaglover1
2008-06-01 . chapter 5
Sorry, it's me again. i just want to make sure this is a inu/kag fic. If it's not, i don't want to read anything else but that.
CraziAznGirl
2008-03-15 . chapter 23
oh my god...
*tears* this is like by far one of the best stories i have ever read!
kudos kudos. :']
I always became teary-eyed in almost every chapter. It was just too good!
And to think that if this story wasn't completed when I started reading it, then the suspense would have driven me insane!
I LOVED the plot, the whole line of the story. Everything came together at the end and all my questions were answered. Not many stories actually do that! They leave me questions unanswered.
YOU are an EXCELLENT author :]]
I would rate this story 5 golden smilies!
:D :D :D :D :D
LunaCharon88
2008-01-31 . chapter 23
ok i have not read a story that good in a LONG LONG time your an awsome writer please keep it up oh dont forget to let me know what other storys you got next k XP

LOTS LOVE
LUNA
ayumi
2008-01-25 . chapter 23
aw such a sweet ending. this story was so sad in the begining and middle it almost made me cry. awesome story!!
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