 dddynamite 12/25/06 . chapter 12Wow really good I liked it alote! |
 all the glitters 12/24/06 . chapter 12Great story! :D Loved it! It was really sweet. Very different, but it worked so well. Merry Christmas, sweetie! |
 chili-peppers 12/24/06 . chapter 12Oh wow! amazing story! Loved the ending! awesome job! your a great writer! Happy christmas! |
 prplerayne 12/24/06 . chapter 12Wow, this was definately a whirl wind of a story chica! But what a GREAT ending it had! I'd love to hear what your idea is for your next story. I'm a fan of 'Cruel Intentions' so you already have me interested! |
 all the glitters 12/23/06 . chapter 11Scary stalker... Great update. |
 chili-peppers 12/23/06 . chapter 11W!awesome job! cant wait for the next chappy! |
 prplerayne 12/23/06 . chapter 11Ahh. Gotta love the way Flack thinks! Great chapter! It looks like Lindsay is starting to formulate a plan for escape! Woohoo! |
 ChocoBetty 12/23/06 . chapter 10I just remember that the DNA in "Run Silent, Run Deep" came back to a sample from the lab, so I'm wondering if Flack would ask for fingerprints because I guess that they already have to fingerfrints of any employe on a database. You could leave one accidentaly at a crime scene that you are working. And it wouldn't make much sense to search for an unknown fingerprint just to find out later that it was one of the crimse scene investigators or one of a Detective. Well, just a tought... |
 prplerayne 12/23/06 . chapter 10Oh that's a great chapter! Well, that solved the questions of who killed Linda and why. Now the only question that remains is, is he planning the same fate for Lindsay? I certainly hope not! |
 dddynamite 12/22/06 . chapter 10Wow scary..I can't wait to see what happens! |
 all the glitters 12/22/06 . chapter 10Great update. Personally, I don't think the story has to be long, just until he finds her and says that he doesn't care that people judge him for being with her. Of course, she'd also join the team. D
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 chili-peppers 12/22/06 . chapter 10Aw! i hope danny finds her! awesome update! |
 ChocoBetty 12/22/06 . chapter 9First of all I have to say that I haven't payed that much attention to the words of "Patience" yet, maybe because english isn't my first language so I usually pay more attention to the music and get back to the lyrics later when I have the song and I want to sing along or something like that, so: Sorry, but I can't say anything about your idea with "Love run cold".
About this chapter: Don't have much to say somehow. I'm just watching "Rain" on DVD at the moment (episode 7 of season 1) and just recognized how much Danny has changed, inside and outside. I was surpised when I saw "MIA/NYC Nonstop" for the first time a couple of weeks ago: Completely different. They changed a lot.
But somehow parts of this remind me about "On the Job", a little bit "Run Silent, Run Deep".
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 chili-peppers 12/22/06 . chapter 9Oh wow! the last few chappys were awesome! I love this story so far! cant wait for the next one! |
 prplerayne 12/22/06 . chapter 9It seems to me like they're gonna find the evidence to clear Danny and soon! Story alerts let you know when a story you are reading has been updated. I have this one on alert, so that when you post a new chapter, sends me an email to let me know that it's been updated for me to R&R. |