Finally decided to review this:

Yet again another nice piece for the MollyxJordan shippers out there! I love these "missing moments" fics you write. And I cannot say how pleased I am to see you use my quote in your fic: "His mother taught him that under no circumstances was it ever okay to make a girl cry." Jordan is such a traditional kind of guy! Great job!

Aww, it's cute! I can always appreciate a good Jordeva fic, even if it's just friendship.

Oh! Nanashi! This was positively adorable! xD

This is a thoughtful attempt to convey the strange relationship Molly and Jordon share as it is one that relies on trust, understanding, mutual friendship and a little bit of give and take.

I especially enjoyed how you made all the various incidences fit along the episode timeline instead of strangling your one-shot into a talk the two young people share after the race where everything is 'kissed better' or so to speak...it was a refreshing break of pace to a site cluttered with them. Of course this means that your time interval is a lot more spaced out so Molly's disgruntal acceptance of Jordon is handled at a natural speed. In other words, you've got a very nice feel of realism here.

You said you wanted to show the 'meaning' of the strange bond the two are a part of, including or regardless of romantic feelings, as well as what it means to them...and I sincerely believe you've achieved it. Well done.

Cool, another follow-up! This was nice; well written and emotionaly packed. I didn't catch any spelling or grammer errors, so good job! Putting up on faves!
-Renegade

Yay! More One-Shot JordanEva fics! *dances in pure joy*
I love your stories! They're so fun!
This one was esprcially cute. I liked the bit about the ramen noodles.

Very cute!! I really liked this story, it was sweet and simple while really entertaining to read!

Great job!