A great story. Very good.

wow!! really good! we never actually learn too much about McGinnis in the books, and i enjoyed reading your story. great job!

-daphne vs

Looks great, keep going!

~Anna Christie~

Wow! This is such an original idea for a story. I assume you'll be focusing on McGinnis, which I think is a very interesting character. I'm so excited about where this story potentially is headed. Please keep up the great work! It sounds great so far!

very cool