sorry but my other review got cut off you know you can't review the same chappy twice..but as i was sayin how could she make such a bargain and put not only her childs life but that of her sisters life in danger as well

wow talk about a good story im glad everything worked out with ginrei and rin i was so worried that rin would kill herslef and i absolutely hated the fact that sesshomaru got with ginrei but at the same time ...i dunno..lol anyway i plan on readying the next story in this series but it won't be for a while i put my life on hold for 3 days (luckily i had them free lol) to read these..yes im a slow reader ..but now i need to get back on track i can't wait to see what the girls are like when they get older i have a feeling they will be close and them getting seperated will be a bit hard ..and why the hell did rin make such a bargain

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Hey,
That was a great chapter, however damn that Sesshomaru she says practically what he wants to hear... and he doesn't even say it back. I'm sorry but... what a JERK what a douche. Gr. Anywho I am so tired that I need to sleep as much as I would LOVE to read the next right now I worked really hard today... I work in a barn actually. I thought it was cool you threw in the whole horse thing in. I actually I had a horse almost like the one she rode. he was gray (more a white color) and was a gelding with a kinda pink muzzle only he had also some dark grayish black around the pink he was an Arab =) his name was Jasper but he passed away. But that's alright he is still loved no matter where he has gone, and we were blessed with another horse who needed us. So now I have a little liver chestnut morgan mare. =) Bookers Babe (Aka just Babe)
Anywho enough of my random rambling... it just kinda took me through memory lane cause Jasper HATED water of any type. I

That was pretty neat, but I hope Rin keeps persisting as well guilt tripping. So far it's been very good! And yay for the baby! She made it! Tough little Saya... however Rin nearly died, shouldn't she decide the name. Lol but hey every parents handles it differently, and have they. Great job =)

Aw that was sweet, she should still however guilt trip Sesshomaru for being so cold. I thought it was so random but I listened to another song that reminded me kinda of Rin's side of things I suppose... it goes something like...

Boy meets girl, you were my dream my world,
but I was blind, you cheated on me from behind.
so on my own I feel so all alone,
Though I know its true... I'm still in love with you.

I need a miracle I want to be your girl,
give me a chance to see that you were made for me.
I need a miracle please let me be your girl.

Day and night I'm always by your side,
cause I know for sure my love is true my feelings pure.
Cause I know its true I'm still in love with you.

I need a miracle I want to be your girl,
give me a chance to see that you are made for me.
I need a miracle please let me be your girl, some day you will see it can happen to me can happen to me.

Great chappy!

That was a very interesting chapter. I liked it, and I like that she stuck her ground. It was a very lovely chapter. I heard a song that kinda reminded me of this story. It goes something like...

I can't make you turn around,
I can't take back what I did.
Wouldn't blame if you hated me.
Before you slam that open door,
throw away four good years,
think of everything we used to be.
You say that your over me,
but I'm asking you begging you not to leave.

(Chorus)
What if I told you I'd change. Would you stow away?
What if I told you I loved you? Would you say its to late?
What if you could feel what I feel when I watch you
slowly drift away.
What if your wrong, what if I'm right, that you could move on, what if you stayed.

Right now its hard to breathe,
hard to think and hard to see...
all the reasons we should work it out.
Might be easier to go, but if you walk out we'd never
know how strong we could be at the end of this.
Sorry is not enough, but I will do anything anything to make it up.

Anywho that is all that the version I have sings. But it kinda reminded me of those two. Anywho GREAT job LOVED IT.

I like this chapter, and I don't know what is to come next. What is next is already written, but I must say... she should give him more then a piece of her mind he was wrong. Anywho about the Innocence I like it, I would love to see what you come up with!

Oh no! How sad! I have been sick for several days, so I just got to reading today. Anywho great chapter! Oh NO! Poor Koinu! How could Sesshomaru be so cruel to his own Nephew? Gr Sesshomaru gr... lol! Anywho great chappy. I will get to the rest tomorrow after I get out of work (which will suck since I have the flu. OH YAY.)
Later,
-Love4horses

That was awesome! HOWEVER I have to go unfortunately, gr why does everyone want to hang out only when I am reading? Damn it damn it damn it! GR anywho good job. I will hopefully get to it soon. =)
-Love4horses

Hey,
it's me again! Great chapter, however... Rin is not the same person, that makes me sad. I really don't like her attitude, lol. That's just not the Rin we know, but she has every reason to be cold and mean. Just not to her friends and little fox demons, that just aint right. Anywho I am off to read another chapter, I was away from a computer for two days so I wasn't able to read... but here I am trying to finish it so I can finally finish my story.
Later,
Love4horses

this is a great story i sat and read your whole series its just great

Oh man I really want to move to the next chapter, however it is 4:16 and I must wake up before twelve. And I have to get a LOT of sleep, other wise I get REALLY hyper. So off to bed I sadly go, but promises of returning tomorrow hang in the air. =) I really like it now, now that he wants her back... I do however, tend to get annoyed, when there are little tid bits of him with his um other woman it makes it seem like why the heck does he even care if he can "watch her" or "gaze at her" and what not. Hm I don't know, I think Rin deserves better then that. However what is written is written, I do like how Rin is more um grown up like... but it makes me sad the way she treats her friend. She is a good loyal friend to Rin, and is constantly being taken hostage. Why couldn't Rin just ask her to come along for both their protection? She could have used the excuse that Sesshomaru would kill Tskuki... uh I am not good with their names at ALL, if Rin wasn't returned. Which would cause their whole plan to go KAPOOT. Anywho enough of my rambling, great job I will looking in tomorrow. You are a great writer.
-Mariel

Wow it is 3:43 AM I am going to read the next chapter so I can go to sleep knowing what happened. Alright, here I go...