So sad, and so pretty. The ending of the Sandman series hurts so much. On the subject - go read my poem written on finishing The Wake. It's a similar idea. I think that book makes a lot of people write.

WOAH... that is one sickly powerful poem. Suits Morpheus and the Wake itself. Wonderful poem! Keep it up!

*smile and applauds*

short, simple, and it paints a pretty picture, keep up the good work dude!

what a gorgeous poem. very stirring. lovely. NOW GET ON WITH WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Very evocative. Another excellent piece of work.

Interesting poem. Very visual. I'm still waiting for the next chapter.