I think that my absolute favourite part of this story is that, in spite of all the character herein's wrong doings, you've not only kept them humane, but completely sympathetic.
Yeah, Stan's shit is pretty hard to swallow, but theres a well thought out psychological reason for said shit that propels him throughout the story, screws him over tenfold, opens his eyes to reality and develops his character.
Not to mention, every.single.character is wonderfully flawed in a way that makes them believable and relatable.
The first person POV is irking, and it took me awhile to get over that I will admit. As well, the writing does tend to become a bit flat at some points, and sometimes feels somewhat generic.
I love it! I can't wait to read more.

I have to say this is the best fic I've ever read, everything about it makes me just that much more interested in what will happen next, or how will they get out of that and probably a thousand different outcomes will instantly pop in my mind for each and every little detail your story has.
I love this, I couldn't even stop and review between chapters~ it's just left me wanting more, and for once I'm glad it's not finished it gives me a feeling of reasurance almost (ahh, I can't think of the right word to describe it) that I'll have something to look forward to when you do update. (and again I can't find the right way to word it;;)
It has to be rediculosly difficult to write a paring through neither of their veiws, but you make it look so easy, you pull it off not only brilliantly but flawlessly as well. I have to commend you for staying true to it too.

Well this is getting long and it's pretty late here too~ So I'll end it with saying I'm completely jealous of your writting style and dedication and that I hope this story lasts a while. I love it! (also sorry for the bad review I couldn't properly express just how much I loved this)
Thank-you :)

i'm glad that stan is straight again in this chapter

wheres the rest of this story? you are leaving me intrigued and I want to know what happens to kyle and stan. Yes, I am a true WendyxStan fan, yet I am feeling exactly the same as Wendy. There must be a reason to why you are writing this fic.

I've never hated Stan, although at time he was selfish and cowardly, he had his reasons.
(And I'm pretty sure I was like the only person who didn`t hate him either;;)

I`m actually curious as to how Wendy plans to set them up, especially after the conversation with Kyle! He's pretty much declaired that even though he may still want Stan he won`t go back for him.
Poor Stan too, atleast Kyle's parents were supportive! Stan`s gonna be sent to some Jesus Camp if Wendy doesn`t do something fast!

Uwahh! And it`s been so long since an update, haha. I hope you continue this soon. I`m just hoping you didn`t lose any hope on this yet! Although an update even four years later will still make me as happy if it was posted the next day! (Although it`d be more convenient, haha)
Haha, I`m sorry if the review is a little short it`s like 3 in the morning and I`m pretty tried. I`m probably gonna re-read the chapter in the morning, just to make sure I got it all--

And congragulations on your publishing! If I see your book in any bookstores near me I`ll be sure to purchase it!

Just a short review for this chapter.
(I'm not entirely sure if I am suposed to tolerate, like or hate Stan, haha)

I am so happy for Kyle that his parents accepted his sexuality without any (give or take the hate for stealing Stan from Wendy) trouble, to tell the truth I didn't expect them to be so open minded. Now on the other hand when Stan asked Wendy about Kyle, is just like how Wendy asked Kyle about the picture. Although Wendy and Kyle are on good terms he didn't want to talk about it, and when she persisted I couldn't help but think that Kyle would have more rights to the relationship than Wendy did, even if publicly Wendy and Stan was the apparant couple Kyle and Stan had the love. Wendy really doesn't have the right to why that photo is so important to him if Kyle has no intention of telling why.

-- Now on a side note.
KYLE CAN'T SWITCH SCHOOLS!
I know he always swore to leave the town he can't leave! He just can't. He can wait untill after he graduates, can't he?! Do you know what that'd do to Stan?! Unlike Wendy he never got to say goodbye, when it comes down to that it isn't just losing another lover but Kyle was his best friend for as long as he could remember. To leave without even saying anything, after such a huge fight too, you just can't do that.
(Haha, I swear I tried to make this review a small one.)

Aww-- Kyle! Stan is such an asshole, honestly playing off a fake relationship to hide another more serious more important one even to risk the heartbreak of another is one thing but playing off this to make it look as if he just had a little fight is on a whole new level! On the emotional level what Stan is doing now is far worse than what he was doing before. Atleast he had a reasons for puting on an act but now he's only doing it for himself. Kyle was right Stan is a huge fucking selfish bastard!!

(But wait! You said Wendy and Stan had sex for four years if their seventeen the first time they did it would have been when they were 13!)

Holy shit as much as I agree with Bebe that Wendy should talk to Kyle if Wendy drinks any more she's gonna vomit all over him!
Atleast Wendy understands that Kyle isn't the badguy, that she shouldn't hate him even if he was the one being cheated with.
Still Wendy, if he doesn't want to talk he just doesn't want to talk. I'm sure just being in Wendy's presence makes Kyle feel terrible. (btw I love his dragon)
Gahh! But I still cannot get over just how good of a guy Kyle really is honestly! Ho'jesus! Kyle! I feel so bad for him, is that what he thinks?!
I can honestly say I love how you write these guys, you make me love each and every single one of them! (even if right now Stan is defininatly pushing the 'dislike' limit)


Oh my God, I have no idea why but kinda teared up when Kyle said he didn't have many friends anymore. It's just that he wouldn't, he spent all that time with Stan and now that he broke his heart he has no one left. I really don't know but he is just so nice, his postition was only there is because he found love in the most terrible places. Kyle was more mad about the not being able to admit it rather than the cheating. That kind of stuff is important to him, he doesn't deserve that sadness. The forgiveness Wendy gave him made me like Wendy so much, that she know's that it hurt's him so much that he was involved in that but she understadnds just how bad he feels, that he truely regrets it.
Bahh! I don't even know what I'm even trying to say anymore!

Wait, he loved him for ten years? I think out of all of them from Stan to Kyle to Wendy, I honestly think it was the roughest for Kyle. For ten years he wanted him, yearned for something that he knew would never come true. Wendy hadn't gone through that she had Stan for those ten years, she never had the same longing that Kyle had. And once Kyle was given the oppertunity to have his miracle of course he would have to take it, even if it meant bringing pain to Wendy, it was the only chance he had. And still it was taken away from him, still by details.
That to me is far worse than losing a long love, or even the two most important people to you.
WAIT A MINUTE! KYLE CAN'T TRANSFER SCHOOLS!!
I know I said before that I'd probably just run but Kyle can't leave! That would tear Stan apart! (even if I'm mad at him at the moment I still can't hate him cause I know he's hurt by this too) Still, I think Stan should have talked to Kyle. I don't know I think it would have helped even if they'd just hurt eachother more (because I don't think they would be able to say one word without hurting eachother.) I still think that Stan need's to get his side of the story out too.

(sorry again if my reviews make no sence what-so-ever)

Gahh! I wasn't done writing! Shit! And at the worst possible part too!

Honestly I would just run. After so long Wendy would just not be able to bare it, I just feel so bad for her she was hurt and betrayed for so long. I can;t hate her.
Now Stan, he may be a little bit more easy to hate~ Not saying I do, his intentions were good just at the expense of someone who loved him.
I find that terrible even if it is Stan and it was all in the name of love you just cannot do that.

Bejesus Bebe! Don't put it on Kyle!
Though I do have to agree with him, Stan is kinda being a selfish asshole.

Wait shit a year?! Ho'fuck! Damnit, too many things are happening all at once! I don't know what to say anymore!
Still Kyle is such a nice guy, honestly even if my boyfriend was cheating on me with him (wait. . . Did I just say that?) I'd be fine. Fo'seriously, is is just that much of an over-all good guy.
But damnit as soon as I start to think something everything spirals out to make me feel another. Everyones situation is just too similar, from Wendy, to Kyle, to Stan everyone has to lose someone they love. Wither it be Wendy losing Stan, Stan losing Kyle, or Kyle being tied up with his own sense of both guilt and impatince where he loses Stan too.


Gwaah?! You can't end it there! But Wendy should feel some sort of well something, she should know that Stan is indeed feeling just as bad as she is, she got what she wanted Stan is no longer happy he is broken. Still what about Bebe?! What about Kyle?!
Gahh! I need to read the next chapter right now!

(I decided to write this review while I was reading the chapter so I wouldn't forget to review. So in advance I apologize if some of what I say doesn't make any sence. And sorry if I contradict myself, I tend to do it a lot.)
I have to say that I do understand why Stan does fullheartedly deserves what Wendy's planning to do with him. He [i]is[/i] cheating on her, even if he doesn't really have any ill-intentions behind it. He does love her, just not in the ways he used too.
Oh Bebe, even if she's a total hoe I can't help but love her~ I have no idea why either, haha. The only thing I do know is that I don't trust her.

Oh God! Poor Timothy! I'm sure Stan would remember his name~ Haha, it would probably just take a while~
Frankly, I can easily say that I'd be terrifiyed of Wendy if I knew her by now. I mean not only with ol'Timmy over here but for Stan and Kyle too. It's just plain torchure!
Especially to Kyle though, since he has atleast an idea of whats going on with Stan he's just plain oblivious! Aww-- I feel so bad for Kyle though~ He's just so akward and spazzy~ It's not like Kyle's the one who's (more so I guess since he is cheating too) at fault here!
Uwahh~ But i think I know what Wendy's gonna do. And I for one don't like it at all!

(But I think I know where Wendy get's it, her mom's a bitch!)
I didn't think she'd tell her mother actually, I guess that's good then. Now her mom will atleast be able to understand what's happening with her daughter and not think she was turining into some crazy, angry delinquent.

Geez, I'm suprised they didn't get caught already, Wendy's out there screaming and yelling! She could wake up the whole neighbourhood! And honestly, with Bebe wearing her camo suit in a neighbour even sees them their gonna be arrested for robery or something! (Even if it is kinda along the lines of what their doing.)
Ehh, but she shouldn't be that mad, even she knew before that Stan would be too hard to ressist. Of course Kyle wouldn't be able to break it off. (Damnit Kyle's my favorite so I tend to overly defend him~)

Oh shit!
Hones

I'm acctually really upset by this, it has honestly been a while since I've read such a good fic. I know it sounds corny or something like that but for the past god knows long any of the stories i've read in that time have not come to terms with this one. I am just so captured by it, right know I should be sleeping! I have to get up early but I can't put this down.

So much has happened in this chapter that i have no idea where to start, I feel absolutely horrid for everyone! The date went no where near what I had expected from it, it's hard for me to chose a side because Stan is the one who's dating both of them which makes me think he kinds diserves it but at the same time he; like you said really does love Kyle. And he's so upset by it too, even before the date he was tearing up!
Wendy on the other hand wants to believe so badly that either Stsn does or doesn't love her like the way she loves him, but he doesn't. I feel so bad because she has to endure not only Stan being upset but him faking something that meant so much for her. Even if she is coniving she has reasons!
Now for Kyle it was plain hell to bring him on that date. Of course he's always been a good guy so he wouldn't be able to handle that sort of thing! Then with Stan leaving the resturant he still defended Wendy even though they aren't even on that good of terms. Kyle's always been my favorite so I always feel for him but everyone has been through hell!

And then with the notes at the end I could hardly bare it, Wendy still tried to believe something that numerous times has been disproved; that Stan and Kyle were only 'just friends' and then with the note it was just throwing it in her face! Kyle didn't even know he loved him!

So much has happened in this chapter I'm sorry if I forgot anything (and for the huge rant!) I'm sorry if this didn't even make sence either, I'm kinds tired!
Anyways I love the story and can't wait untill I continue reading!

I don't have a good feeling about this, haha strangely I love Wendy in this. Even if she's terrible with homophobia (Well 'style'phobia) and her constant Wendyness I still can't hate her. Ahaha.
I just wanna know what Kyle's gonna do, haha he can just flat out refuse to go all! Still I'm sure Stan could persuade him~

Gahh! Now I'm wondering what Stan's gonna do, he has to be atleast a little suspicious of Wendy knowing. Sure he can be stupid but not that much, right?!

This has got to be one of the best stories I've read in a long time, seriously! I love the whole set-up of it all, how the stories centered around their realtionship but in a third parties view~
Honestly I'm usually turned off by imediate sex type stories, it just doesn't sit with well with me they're rarely done well. And I say yours is one of the best I've seen! The realtionships are all done well and everyones perfectly in character.

I have to say though, poor Wendy! Her whole relationship was a lie, and when she thought it was going perfectly too and to think with his best friend too.
But time for my incrediblely doubting side to come out~ When Stan said Ky he could mean Kylie or something of that sort. Kyle could have been in the other room getting food or a drink, and Stan could be cheating on Wendy with another girl? Haha, I guess that could be better, that he's not cheating on her with another man?
Either way, I love the story so far! You are an amazing writer!

Wow, I absolutely adore how you portay Wendy! At first I thought that would be absolutely impossible to get her as deep as you do, say, Stan or Kyle, but I was completely mistaken. Of course, I also love the new but completely realistic sides to the characters. My personal favorite is Bebe, even though I'm not particularly fond of her in the show.

Update, please. Four months? I'm going crazy here. x.x

Ok, first I'd just like to point out that I never do this. Review in the middle of a fiction...normally I just read to the end and review then, but this was just too good and I had to review right now...and it's only the second chapter.

I love how you portray Wendy...really. I don't really think much of her in the show, but you did a great job writing her and getting her emotions right. I just love the whole way you wrote this story. Anyway, I suppose I'd better read some more chapters. Loving it so far!

:O Ok, my dear, you have amazed me!

This story is something that I would really hate as it's *pukes* Stan/Kyle, but you have definately made me turn around and see what it must be like if this pairing happened in the show :S

I really love that Stan has realized what he has done wrong and I hope to make it up to Wendy he'd perhaps...*says in a meek voice* date her again?...

Oh, I don't know, you do what you want to do! If Kyle comes back, FINE but I don't want to see him going goo-goo over Stan and Stan returning the goo-goo ness :S

I agree with Pheonix I that you are indeed a couple of steps ahead of M&T :)

Update soon?