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Catty
2007-09-11 . chapter 2
Yay oh yay, a Frank and Olga story. As with th others, I'm a little worried that Frank has woken up in his perfect world ( is he going to want to sort this all out or stay where he is??), and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Looking forward to more.

C
Zucht
2007-05-15 . chapter 3
I think the story is very interesting, I can't wait until the next chapter!
Cassandra30
2007-05-14 . chapter 3
Good story. I'm agog with anticipation?? What is going to happen next!!
Cassandra30
2007-05-14 . chapter 2
Ok! Wow! What a plot twist! Need the rest of the story like now!!
Cassandra30
2007-05-14 . chapter 1
Good story! Nicely written! Poor Frank! Clueless male!!
Zucht
2007-01-11 . chapter 2
Ok, now i'm curious. Is he draming, in an alternate universe, somehow in the future, or what? If he is in the future, was her being upset a result of being pregenant? I'll be on pins and needles until the next chapter. Good job.

Oh yea, you need to find something to place between the A/N's and the text of your chapter; also chapter breaks, switching locations without warning can be confusing.
Zucht
2006-12-29 . chapter 1
Howdy!

Good story, I can't wait to see where you take it. It felt right reading it, the miscommunication is classic between those two. Keep up the good work.

I'm also a Texan, graduated college, have ridden horses (not lately) and wear a cowboy hat.
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