xD awesome

Oh LOL, I like it! ;D I love VincentxCloud, one of the pairings I actually like! It really sucks that Cloud wasn't a lot in DoC... but I do consider their phone talk as a phone sex... XD

And in AC, it should have happen something... it should have... XP

cool another awsome one-shot buy you
lol cloud fight them naked :D that would be a funny sight to see :S

That was sexy, hot, dirty, kinky mansex... I LOVE IT!

Props to you for mentioning Cloud's freckles! Nice idea, DOC didn't have enough of Cloud in it anyway, and I always like the idea of Cloud and Vincent fighting side-by-side... a scene we were robbed of when it ended up being Marlene that snuck up on them in Advent Children. Great way finish too.

Nice xD

so cute!

Hahahahaha...oh Shiva, that really killed me. The best I think you've written EVER. For a second, I forgot that you wrote it. You're getting quite good. But if you will, allow me a moment to point out a few of my favorite parts, as to show my appreciation where mindless compliments and flattery could not.

"Cloud, the world-class keep-my-eyes-shut-while-you-screw-me champion"...oh that was a good phrase. You really can do humor.

"If the DG soldiers wanted to come, let them, Cloud would take care of them one by one with his buster sword. Naked, if he had to. Cloud made a mental pause. Getting ** sure did make his thought processes go out the window." -that was probably another one I had to read again, just to make sure I read it right.

Honestly, great work. I don't think I could ever hope to be as good as you are in this genre. I just don't have it in me. Thanks for the amusement.

-A

Oh la la... I definitely LOVE this!! They make such a cute couple... especially while doing the dirty-dirty!! YOU'RE AN AWESOME WRITER! HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE VINCENT X CLOUD!! HURY! :p