I want to know how this works out. It's sort of flip flopping between Eragon/Essora and Murtagh/Essora

Personaly I am in favor of Eragon/Essora... But that means Eragon will have to pull his head out of his arse and realize he loves Essora and is driving Essora right into Murtagh's arms.

If you get this please update. I know it's been a long while.

I really hope you decide to continue with this story! I love it! x

At least he is protecting her. I hope that they don't get to see Durza anytime soon!
EP

ya. ok. i am too lazy to sign in and i am leaving soon so ya. anywho, back to the story. ehmm...this is really good. love it lots. i mean LOTS! you really NEED to update soon!!

elfy14

i didn't see no water from sand event but still a great chapter. nice change of events.

good good good i dont know what else to say except excellent i luve ur story

O. Arya or Essora? Which one? I think that him and Essora is good because he like completely dumped her and that's not very nice.
Please write more!
EP

i love it!

great chapter! please update soon. that meanie eragon! abandon his friends when they need him most. but in a way it was a good thing..cause murtagh and essora like eachother now. anywho..please update soon. you are doing a awesometastic job!!

elfy14

update soon

i love it!

very "fluffy" as my friend says for moments of happiness. i like this chapter. really good. can't wait for more!

this story rock!! keep updating please!

You're writing an obvious Mary-Sue, I've seen other mary-sue stories, this one is longer and more developed, very out of canon though, and rather random.

Can't you people write something more origianl?

And you're writing information that Essora doesn't even know, maybe you should work on that.

Well, don't think of this as a flame, but mary-sue's bug me a lot.

*@$%&* awesome (i just used symbols but everyone knows hwat i mean