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CaliforniaBabeWV
2008-07-06 . chapter 1
*Sqee!*
I loved your fanfic! It was so cute ,it's great.Perfect in every way!
I thought it was cute that Aerith was gambling .Cloud was even more cute with everyone of his actions
mystic-Hoshi
2007-03-24 . chapter 1
i loved the ending! was it Yuffie and Cait Sift? or someone else...lol. the way you described Cloud's feelings was really good, and made understandable to the reader. =) good job!
LastCetra
2007-03-24 . chapter 1
Honestly, one of the best Cloud and Aeris fanfics I've read. Ever. Seriously, it was so good! I loved the little details you put into Aeris' character, like the small quirks she had, or the expressions she'd use, and though I thought her gambling addiction was going to be something really humourous and ooc I was surprised at how much you made it suit her.

Cloud's worrying was adorable without going to extremes, as we have seen FAR too many times, and I liked how much Aeris was able to bring out the adventerous side of him, albeit a bit reluctantly! Your spelling and grammar is excellent, and overall, it was a very nice fic, and a definite fave for me!

I apologise for the length of this review.

LastCetra
Dirtberry
2007-02-04 . chapter 1
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!

I can't believe you wrote something so fluffy, and I can't believe myself either that I actually read something so fluffy! Remind me how long it's been since i've read something overloaded with cloaer sugar and fluff and waff and all the likes, that's ever capable of making me hug my pillow as i read this and go "aw" and "kawai" countless times! it made me smile like some crazy cheshire grinning cat, and somehow the thought of associating Cloud to a doofus who doesn't know love the first time he sees it, keeps popping up randomly in my head. so you can imagine my thoughts whilst reading this fic goes along the line of "aw cloud you doofus, you love her already c'mon! and KAWAII! there's so much fluff, and i'm dying from sugar overload!" - yup, something like that. ^_^

anyway, i haven't read such an awesome cloaer fic (and i mean it: awesome, not to mention, really long. but what the heck, i made it anyhow! grins, and who cares if it's long as long as it's awesome through and through?) in such a long while, and it certainly brings back fond memories of my cloaer days.. what's the quote again? once a cloaer fan, always a cloaer fan! and fics like this where it pictures cloud and aeris before her death are rare and in-between now, what's more a good one even!

apologies for the long review, but i couldn't contain my joy in reading this lovely cloaer fic. you captured their personalities so well, i don't know how you managed to do it. it's like the person who wrote those dialogues in the ffvii storyline came alive in this fic or something, and i swear the dialogues flow seamlessly in-character. um, enough of my ramblings, this is without a doubt going onto my favorites.

and keep the cloaer fics coming, too! Aerith's birthday is coming - surely that means something to you, too? (smiles)
Difinity
2007-01-19 . chapter 1
Excellent. Truly excellent.
I applaud you. =)

- Difinity
asga
2006-12-21 . chapter 1
so adorable ^^ hehe never imagine Aeris likes to gamble ^^ Hope to see more stories from you ^^
Meilinoa
2006-12-21 . chapter 1
You know what... I'm a hardcore Cloti. And I'm going to flame your fic!

...

No just kidding ^.^ Sincerely, altgought I've been a Cloti since I played the game...I found your fic amazing! truely beautiful, and sweet and realistic! Aerith's personnality is so well-captured...And Cloud trying to act cool when he just doesn't know how to do so around her...I love the way they interact and their chemistry in your fic!!

And as someone said before me...The part where Cloud returns to the Gold Saucer is heartbreaking...you had described her cheerfulness so well that when I read that part, I felt some kind of loss and emptiness, sadness...

And the fact that your fic is not too fluffy and all is really enjoyable.

Well, I'm done with ma review now. Just to let you know: your fic was so-well written that even Cloti absolutely loved it! ^.^
Fuuraiken
2006-12-21 . chapter 1
aw, your story was so fluffy and cute! I loved it, thank you for writing it :)
Lone Wulffe
2006-12-21 . chapter 1
Hahaha, really cool fic! Can't picture Aeris as the gambling girl... okay, maybe I can. Anyways, two thumbs up for this one.
The Tiramisu Of Impending Doom
2006-12-21 . chapter 1
Oh thank heavens, I was getting tired of those Aeris died so now Cloud's moping and remembering her oneshots. I like reading about fics where she's alive sometimes. And I can definitely imagine her as a gambler. I like how you didn't do an overkill of fluff. Just right, and that kiss on the cheek was so sweet, with Cloud wondering if that kiss meant the same as it had for the other guys. Oh no, Cloudie. She likes you and your nice biceps. Go figure. Anyway, thanks for sharing.
icor
2006-12-21 . chapter 1
Lately I've found it really difficult to find well-written Cloud/Aerith fics, so I'm so happy to find this one! And hey, even though I'm not all that big on fluff, this was adorable none the less, both as a C/A story and a stand-alone character study of Aerith herself.

And the bit about Cloud returning to Chocobo Square and losing every time was just horrible and heart wrenching, but it really made it seem *real,* somehow. I think that was probably my favourite part of the entire fic.

Anyway, thanks a lot for sharing this, I enjoyed it a lot. :)
Beeria
2006-12-21 . chapter 1
Hee hee I love the last couple of lines. This was a great fic. One of the best one shots I've read in a long time. Awesome!
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