It's an ok story but next time u might want to try a disclamer

This is actually a really good start for someone having not read JTHM yet. I'm actually quite impressed. Some of the descriptions you've used were very vivid and original (ie. worse than Hell and Jimmy combined. That line made me laugh).

My only complaints are that other than some minor typos, it is stated that Nny detests sleeping and I was curious as to what exactly would make Nny want to fall asleep. I can't blame you completely for this fault since you haven't read the comic yet. Maybe the reason for his sleeping will be explained in the next chapter.

Other than that, you're doing a great job so far and I'm curious to see where this story goes next (should you consider to continue with it).

For someone who is limited with Johnny the Homicidal Maniac, this is very well-written. :P You should continue.

~Snuffie