good fanfic :)

well couldn't the sequal be how all th9is happened i mean you only briefly described it in this story so why don't you write all about in a proper fanfiction and make this one the sequal to it well let me know by dropping me a line talk soon XOXOXOXOXOX

All right, I was not really serious when I chose Will/Phobos and I didn't think I'd actually like it but oh my, I loved this. I'm a sucker for forbidden love. LOL. (Do you read Harry Potter? Well, I'm a Draco/Hermione shipper. I started with them as an experimant too and I ended up a crazed and obsessed Dramione fan) Anyways, there's not much Will/Phobos here in -sigh- Your fic drove me into liking them. :) Good job.

love it

more pleases so like it

OMG
that was great!
i absolutely loved it, it's so sweet ^_^

i really liked it and i'm glad she decided to stay. i'm not sure what the plot of a sequel would be beyond helping the worlds dependent on them.

;) Great conclusion.

Great chapter can't wait for the sequel.

As for ideas for it all I can think of is:

1) reuniting Will with her mother

2) maybe making it possible for Will to at least talk to her old freinds if not bring them back to life (Nerissa only needed Eylon's power aka the Heart of Merdain to bring back Cassidy and Phobos has even more power then his sister now or at least I think he does)

Okay, first off, this was really good. Short, but great. Second, I can't wait for the sequal. Third...ideas...

What about a baby? Wouldn't that complicate things?

-Alyssa

i adore your story i have sa i really think it's one of the best, but the ending it took me by surprise abit, yeah go a head and write a squeal i look forward to reading that one too!

the story is the best!

Argh, no. Don't send her away. She's going to refuse, right? Then again, can't she just make a portal back?

Yay PxW! Keep up the great work. =)


Umm, this wasn't the last chapter, was it?

dont do a sequel until you actually have finished this story, and second of all keep it going! have them have such a longing for each other that they both meet each other half way through a portal or something or have will try to cross the veil or phobos send his evil minions (muhahaha! I love that word) to try and get her back

update soon!!

what? why? he loves her and knows that she loves him now and after miranda's talk, she knows the same... why would he send her back? why? she has to say no, she has to!