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CosmicEssence 6/2/11 . chapter 1
Its true though!...I've seen a similar one to this only its regarding the tooth fairy and ironhide i think...When you put the 'truth' of what goes on on these nights bluntly it sounds awfully disturbing...and yet we tell it to our kids as a form of comfort! lol...makes no sense.

nice oneshot. red alert is perfect for this.
flamingmarsh 5/26/08 . chapter 1
Red Alert is always so supicious over every little thing. I love christmas. this was good though )
Tatsumaki-sama 1/24/08 . chapter 1
Aww! The Dinobots believing in Santa is so cute. It's just like Red Alert to question a mysterious man breaking into houses. LOL!

/“Besides,” said Carly, re-entering the room, “Santa Claus does exist in the spirit of Christmas. He may not be a real flesh and blood person, but he’s real enough. My grandmother always used to tell me that he lived in the smiles of children and the hearts of kind adults. He’s in every good deed and every kind word.”/

So true.
Straya 12/29/06 . chapter 1
Oh, that was a cute, fun fic! People are always trying to integrate the holidays into various series, but I think this is probably one of the best fics I've seen about it. Poor Red!

"But don’t tell the Dinobots. They still believe, and telling them the truth would be like kicking a puppy."

Now THAT is a classic line.
Jecca Meitahn 12/22/06 . chapter 1
tsk, Red. Are our silly human traditions confusing you? hee. Cute little story! The bit about the Dinobots believing in Santa prompted some strange but cute mental images.

And, uh, because it went over well last time, I spotted a few errors. For example, in the first paragraph, you've used "leaved" when it should probably be "leaves," and in the third to last paragraph, I think the "sonner" is supposed to be "sooner," right? Also, I don't think Santa Claus has an 'e' on the end, but I see it written both with and without it a lot, so... (I think there may be a few places where commas could be inserted, but I also acknowledge that I have an unhealthy love of the little things and tend to insert them more than is really necessary, so I'll just shut up now.)
Ultra Rodimus 12/21/06 . chapter 1
Heh. That's Red Alert, all right. My only nitpick is that there's no "e" in Claus. Unless you're referring to that movie, "The Santa Clause." Otherwise, a good fic.
MegamiMao 12/21/06 . chapter 1
Aw. So cute. This was a fun li'l fic.
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