Aww! I love well written R/D fics! Good job!

-Ahria

I _LOVED_ IT! -

don't worry the fic was so not cheesy. actually it was very deep and literate. the song is cheesy. yeah but thats my favorite song! haha nvm, anyways love the fic keep writing more and kudos to your cat Perot, he's a great inspiration

Nearly two years ago, when the Big O fics you published were months and weeks recent I read them, and was quite impressed. Today, about two years later, I am still a big fan of Big O (no pun intended) and upon re-reading, am still immensely impressed by your fan-fiction. (And that's not so easy to do now-a-days)

Your characterization is, as some one before me said, dead on. Your fan-fiction that has romantic themes is never cloying, but instead stays true to the characters, and makes for a most enjoyable story. In a way I can't explain. It's something along the linges of, in your works that I have read, Roger doesn't lose his crust, but he never falls into being too cynical. Dorothy's never just a robot, but there's something about her that's just not quite human. You have just the right amounts.

Your descriptions and pacing are absolutely first rate. I'm never skimming through because there's a part that's dull or too long. Just the way your sentences are written, much of what you've written sounds strikingly like something that character would be thinking.

I wish there was something I could mention that needs improvement. Right now, however, it escapes me. No one is perfect of course, but Miss, you, are quite amazing.

I do hope thar you continue to write, and wish you the best for the future!

It was ok... though I really wouldent count on my review seeing as I have only seen two episodes of Big-O. But the writing is good and the decent into Roger's psyche is very thought provoking. So all in all it was a good read, and if your into Big-O for more than the mechs, then it is fantastic.

Rating ***1/2 stars (out of six)

You got the cat's name wrong. It's Piro (pi rO)

me like lots, anyway it's not that cheesy just cheesy enough to make it sweet

THAT WAS SOOOO ROMANTIC! IT WAS SO COOL! You got it from part of Big O and made it into a more romantic thing! MORE MORE!MUST MAKLE MORE!

I don't know,but should I say maybe this is cute?

Awwwwwwwwwwwww that was sweet but kinda sad because parrois gone,but sweet.

I enjoyed this...and it's also one of my favorite songs.

omg...i love that song! and the story fir perfectly...can I have da kitty? Another wonderful story hun, I'm almost done! (Ur poems r awesome 2) not lyin! Luvz...ME

i loved this one , im not really in to love stories and love songs but this just sounded like it was the truth.

Wow, that was a good story, and I love that song. I love Elton Jhon! You are an amazing writer and you capture the charactors so well. I have told you befor that your a good writer, and I'll tell you again, damn your good!

I love your fanfic. The only thing that got me confused was your note at the end. There was nothing saying end. Other than that I thought it was one of the best Big O fanfics I've read. What movie were you watching? Keep up the good work.

- Alice