Omg that was awesome! You writing is amazing and this whole storyline, the plot, just soo perfect!

I loved it! I'm fav-ing it!

whoo, creepy. it was your intention that one thought half of the time the gravestone was for bakura, right?^^ Oh, I just *love* fics where it turns out that someone who was just talking is actually dead...^^ cool work!

Angel, I completely forgot that you were the one who wrote that awesome polar one-shot, "Dreaming of You"! I loved that fic! I was going through some old polar fics (I have the list of them bookmarked... ^_^;; ) And I saw your name, and I said, "hey, that's angel from the fanfic contest!" I remembered that I really liked the story, so I pulled it up, then I checked which story you had written for the azure round of season 2, and it was the one I voted for!! So I knew that I immediately had to read some more of your fanfiction! Seriously, you're going on my fav authors list as soon as I'm done reviewing.
Now to the actual review. I did get the ending, probably because I had a plot bunny that was very, very similar to this, only it wasn't a one-shot and there was no conceit-shipping. (I actually used the plot bunny, but it was an original story with characters based on Mai and Jou) I really liked it! The only thing I'm not sure on... Jou was only saying those things because she was (spoiler, people who haven't read fic, stop here.) crazy, right? Like, he didn't actually mean that stuff about her breaking his heary, did he? I wasn't sure... anyway, I have to go now, otherwise I'd keep writing, but GREAT FIC! Way more polar than conceit, so going on my fav story list, too.

*shrugs* Creepy, I don't like the pairings BakuraxMai, I just don't like it no matter what. I like Bakura, indeed, so is Mai. But I don't want to believe they're actually going to end up... that's just crazy! If I want someone for Bakura, that should be someone that can change his heart... heheheeheh, Anzu can be a good example but again, that is impossible. Great angst, there!

This was well-written. ^^ Where did you find this contest and where can I find it?

Very angsty. Jonochi died..TT
I enjoyed reading this fic; you did a great job.

I have to say it's amazing that you manage to write such IC stories for nearly every round of this contest.

Ansgt isn't my preferred read (Nor is this pairing, obviously), but this was definately interesting and well-written. Good job.

Poor Jounouchi, he died so young. Bakura and Mai deserve each other.
Good story.

*MEGA GLOMP* I. LOVED. THAT. SO. BLOODY. MUCH!

You ROCK at angst, this was SO awesome! And I KNOW Conceit could never work, but then again, so would half the pairings in YGO. XP Ah well...we can dream, right?

My only complaint is that this was too short...but great anyways. DEFINITELY favoriting this.

Awesome job, Angel.

WOW! This is so beautiful.. I thought that you put so much emotion into this story.. It must be terrible for someone to think that they caused the death of someone, when really they didn't. Thanks for writing this and keep on writing such great stories...