very very good. i usually dont read hp stories unless their about hermione and draco, but this is really good. :-)

my god dont u get anything right?

all ur info is WRONG

what, like that *isn't* an invisibility cloak? And that note *isn't* from Lauralie's real father? Still, good story.

Hey, I love this story.I had to git up that 6:00am to read some of it.

Hey, I love this story.I had to git up that 6:00am to read some of it.

Sorry can't finish reading right now but this is going on my faves list!

WOW! I just finished Year 1, and I am so impressed! Just like with JK Rowlings books, I couldn't wait to know what happened, but I didn't want it to end. Such talented writing! Keep up the great work! :)

Lauren...omg...i loved it! i loved every word.

Hi Lauren,

I have a FOD, I used to get some codes from your diary... but that's not important. What's important is that I loved this story! I'm at the moment reading the second year! :)! You have a real talent, and I think you do the characters really well as well... In a way, Lauralie reminds me of Harry... just the way you write her... :)!

Stephie

WOW!

i must say that was excelent! wow!

O what a great story.

Sincerley

Tal

Hey the story was great! But umm I thought Siruis was from a long line of Slyths? Oh well still great!

fantastic. can't wait for next installment. im sure itl be as good as the first

Just thought i'd let you know that I think this story is fantastic! It was thoroughly enjoyable, and true to the characters.

Hope this is a satisfactory review!

Hello Miss Snape,

My name is Lisa Meunier. I've read you first installment and I must say that it is one of the best books of all time. I will also give you a small notice that I bestow as the highest honor I can give an aspiring writer: had I not known that this book was one of your personal works, I would have thought it to be wirtten by Joanne K. Rowling herself. You are truely a gifted writer and I hope to see many more of these books pertaining to Lauralie Black. I do have to admit, however, that as a person who has spoken english since she was quite young, (english is my first language), I would advise you to relook your writting. I have spotted many tryping and language errors in this book. It would be helpful to look it over a good many times. Some might not be as obvious as others, but, still, the language could use work. In chapter 13, the last line, as Lauralie is a female, she should be the heiress, and not the heir. In chapter 1, after the first break, a line reads, "What's that any business of yours, you slimy git," Potter snapped. This is in response to Snape asking about James joining Quidditch. However, it should read, "Is that any business of yours, you slimy git." Still, for the little mistakes, I must say, I believe that you have studied JK's writting pattern quite well, as you have Lucius Malfoy sneak up on the group of friends exactly like Draco Malfoy. You have mastered that type of writting to a tee. Continue with the superb work as I, as do my father and sister to whom I have recommended you story, look forward to many more stories about Miss Lauralie Black, heiress to Salazar Slytherin.

Lisa Meunier, your devoted fan!