 zeopurple 2006-12-21 . chapter 1Great fic but be careful about your grammar and using the correct tenses. Sometimes you used the present tense when you should have used the past tense. So make sure you read through the fic and spell check before posting. Ok, now that's out of the way. Really beautiful story, I love that Jason gave Kim a locket with Brandon's picture in it. It was nice to see that he was ok with remembering Kim's first husband. I love Jason/Kim stories. |
 CoolDiva 2006-12-21 . chapter 1Before I tell you how much I loved it (and I did), I have to say that you were slightly off about the time period/ages. The original rangers were fourteen when they became rangers in '93- meaning Kim'd be twenty-three instead of 24 in 2002. Also, Dino Thunder came about in 2004. Not trying to be nitpicky, LOL. Just doing what it says in the review box. Tryin' to be helpful. :) Anyway, this fic was very, very well-written. Sad, touching, beautiful, amazing. I'm completely serious. I honestly almost cried. I love how you put their middle names together for baby Brenda. So cute! Thanks for this fic! GREAT JOB! Happy holidays and Cya! |