okay, please add more of this story, I'd like to see Johnny and Dally hook up or something soon, if they're gonna. I think Dally and Johnny cuddling was pretty cute though.

You know, I was going through my favorites today when I was bored. And I saw this story, and I remembered how I used to love getting an alert for it in my email. Why? Because it was different and it was freakin' brilliant.

Your writing doesn't suck. Just thought I'd stop by and say that. Your writing is different, it's more thoughts than dialogue. Only certain people could do that, and that's a powerful gift to have.

I hope you update soon or something.

-Pictures

boo.

:(

i really dont like this story..

sorry.

you need to use SpellCheck Before you post the chapters.

its all in the guidelines.

:)

Hey! I just re-read this and I'm wondering when you're going to update. *poke poke with a stick* :)

This chapter was amazing as always, I had the feeling that Johnny wouldn't be upset with his Blanc for leaving him, because he's not the kind of person that would be like that, though he better have a damn good reason for leaving and putting Johnny through all of that ): And I do wonder why they came back all of the sudden...did they come because they found out what happened to their parents, or did they just just come because they thought it was about time they saw him? And I do wonder where they're all going to stay, since the house is burned down ; (A motel? The Curtis' place?) I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter, I do hope you update soon! :3

I thought you wrote Sodapop's personality pretty well...I could kind of see him more bubbly though, you know? Kind of hyper and really talkative...like how Two-Bit is, kind of. And Johnny's brother's do seem pretty cool...wonder why Blanc just left Johnny all on his own, but I'm sure we'll find out soon. Wonder what they'll think about Dally, also...knowing how protective he is of Johnny...wonder what he'll think of them... X3 can't wait to see all that happens in the next chapter!

Aw X3 This chapter was the perfect mix of fluff and angst. I like how you explained how Johnny had been in the hospital, how he had "died" and the events that followed...I wonder though, does Johnny now the details of how he died(Dally robbing the store then pulling the gun out on the cops although it was just a bluff to provoke them into shooting him because he couldn't live in a life without him) or does he just know why he got shot? I also like how careful Dally is with him, not wanting to pry with his parents dying and everything, because that's how he would be

I really like this chapter, I'm one that really does like angst, I can be an evil bastard when need be, but I like seeing the happy and fluffy things too, and Johnny and Dally falling asleep with each other is cute

Shorter than the last chapter, but still very well written and amazing. I kinda felt bad for his mom dying when he was thinking of all the good things she had done and how she had at least attempted to make up for some of the bad...she seemed like a decent person-when she was sober. Never though Johnny would be one to start doing drugs...bet no one else knows about that. I wonder why he has stopped hanging around the gang so much and eating less, I mean, he did say that the gang was his family...hopefully all will be revealed in the later chapters, I know I can't wait to find out. Again, amazing chapter and story

I really like how it's going so far, and I like that he and Dally didn't die like they did in the book and that they grew up, never would have thought that Johnny would loose his innocence and be depressed and somewhat cold, since Dally seemed to try to protect him from it, though I guess the old Johnny is just buried away somewhere. And I do wonder why the relationship with him and the Soc. girl didn't work out...maybe it was his feelings for Dally, or was it something else? I am glad that his parents are dead, I never liked either of them, and this story is written beautifully, I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what is in store for Johnny...hopefully things will get better for him since his parents are out of his life?

Yay, they're all togethah! :)

you haven't updated in a really long time...why? it's so good. the oc's are great, i love johnny/dally, and at first i was thrown off by the difference in johnny's behavior, but i'm liking it now. hopefully you didn't abandon this fic...

hugs...empath

Johnny and his brothers are sweet :) He's like Pony now! lol youngest with 2 older brothers- Adrian kind of acts like Johnny too all the shyness- hope it turns out alright for them but the only way to find out is if you update!

its getting good, and they had a sister? does johnny remember her, or not? he must have been really younge is why im asking, and how will he choose between the gang and his brothers?

Actually I have no time for reading today. But I couldnt resist.

It was very sweet in a way. Imagining Dally and Johnny togther. I just live for these moments.

But I also like the introduction of Blanc and Adrian to Johnny. It was...yeah...sweet, weird but and a little tension is buliding. I like this feeling.

Im so glad that I read this chapter...and I hope youll update soon...I really am in love with this story...