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| My-Arabian-Knight 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseAw! IT's so adorable! Cute little Ponyboy. He's such a sweetie! |
| Shadows Run 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseAw. Holiday themed cuteness. I can totally see Pony reacting that way to having a Christmas without his parents, the poor senstitive sweetie. And poor Soda. Poor Darry. But they're very cute together. I liked how you added them visiting their parents' graves, the book never mentions it, and I never thought about it before. Good ficcie. |
| T.J.Grei 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseThat's real cute, good job |
| Van York 16 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abusevery beautiful =) you really have a knack for touching stories |
| Bow and Arrow Archer Girl 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseIt made me cry.. but it was great |
| Jennifer 2006-12-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love the thought of Ponyboy and Soda falling asleep under the tree together. This was a beautiful story. I loved it. ~Jen |
| xodamhsoirxo 2006-12-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseWicked good, I loved it. |
| animalsare4life 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuseKonichiwa! I really Like the story! Poor Pony having a hard time! THem curling up under the tree reminds me of my brothers and sister to a point. Speaking of snow I' quite excited because there is a chance we'll have a white Christmas! Woot! Ne wayy great job and Merry Christmas. Animalsare4life P.S. Ignore the hyperness its our last day til Jan 9 if school. N my totally last day for the classes I'm in. Again sorry! Cya! |
| footie chick 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuseReally enjoyed reading this, only discovered the fan fiction site a few weeks ago, have always loved the outsiders and thought I was alone in writing stories about them. Would like to see more chapters of this |