Wow. Your writing is wonderful. This tale has a gothic vibe to it. I hope some more people start giving you the feedback you deserve soon.

I liked how she thought he was Luis at first and then said she was nobody. Great first meeting for them.

oh man, this can not be a one shot because I have to know who is out there with her! I hope you update soon.

Your writing was so good that I was literally feeling the aching pain that skye felt.